Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。可以直接说明不喜欢唱歌的原因，并简要说明感受。

例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I feel my voice isn't very pleasant to listen to.

提案: 回答时应更准确表达经历，避免语法错误。可以说明曾经参加过学校的唱歌课程，并简要描述。

例: I haven't taken any professional singing classes, but I did attend singing lessons during primary and high school.

提案: 回答应更清晰连贯，避免语法和表达错误。应直接说明想为谁唱歌，并避免自夸。

例: At the moment, I would like to sing for my boyfriend and my parents because they mean a lot to me.

提案: 回答应更自然且语法正确，避免不连贯的表达。可以描述唱歌带来的具体感受。

例: I believe singing can bring happiness. When I sing, I feel relaxed and joyful, as if all my worries disappear.

× I don't have a professional class list for singing, but in primary school and high school I have the singing classes.

✓ I don't have a professional class for singing, but in primary school and high school I had singing classes.

这里'singing classes'是复数形式，表示多节课，符合语境。'class list'不合适，应该用'class'表示课程。并且时态应与过去经历一致，使用过去时'had'。

× Now I only can say I want to sing for my boyfriend or my parents.

✓ Now I can only say I want to sing for my boyfriend or my parents.

'only'应放在情态动词'can'之后，修饰整个谓语，位置错误导致语义不清。

× I think I'm good at singing. I can say I will be 1 to sing for everyone.

✓ I think I'm good at singing. I can say I will be the one to sing for everyone.

'1'应为'the one'表示特定的人，且未来时态表达正确。缺少冠词'the'导致表达不完整。

× When I was when I am singing, I always feel the kind of flower out of me and the streets are fly away.

✓ When I am singing, I always feel a kind of flower blooming inside me and the streets fly away.

原句结构混乱，重复使用'when'，时态不一致。'the kind of flower out of me'表达不自然，改为'a kind of flower blooming inside me'更符合习惯表达。'the streets are fly away'语法错误，改为'the streets fly away'。