Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just enjoy singing along to my favorite songs because it makes me happy.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，建议明确表达感谢父母的原因，并用连贯的句子说明。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they have worked hard to support our family, and singing is my way to show appreciation.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

例: Of course, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and share joy with others.

× When I sing I feel very happy and the in my daily life will get out of my life and it make me more happier so I like singing.

✓ When I sing, I feel very happy and the stress in my daily life will get out of my life and it makes me happier, so I like singing.

这里的主语是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，"more happier"是比较级错误，应该用"happier"。此外，句子中缺少名词"stress"，需要补充。

× No, I just singing by myself and I like to follow the songs no matter how thin I was.

✓ No, I just sing by myself and I like to follow the songs no matter how thin I was.

"just singing"应改为动词原形"just sing"，因为这里是陈述习惯动作。

× No, I just singing by myself and I like to follow the songs no matter how thin I was.

✓ No, I just sing by myself and I like to follow the songs no matter how thin I was.

"was"用法正确，表示过去的状态。

× They paid a lot of in my family and I want to thank for them.

✓ They paid a lot for my family and I want to thank them.

"paid a lot of"后面应接具体名词，缺少名词，且"thank for them"应改为"thank them"，因为"thank"后直接接宾语。

× So I would like to sing for my parents no matter what I seen.

✓ So I would like to sing for my parents no matter what I have seen.

"I seen"应为完成时态"I have seen"，以表达经历。

× it make me more happier so I like singing.

✓ it makes me happier, so I like singing.

"more happier"是错误的比较级形式，"happier"本身就是比较级，不需要加"more"。

× I want to thank for them.

✓ I want to thank them.

"thank"后面不需要介词"for"，直接加宾语。

× I just follow the songs to get more happier.

✓ I just follow the songs to get happier.

"more happier"是错误的比较级形式，应使用"happier"。

× I want to sing for my mother and father.

✓ I want to sing to my mother and father.

表达“为某人唱歌”时，通常用介词"to"而不是"for"。

× I want to thank for them.

✓ I want to thank them.

"thank"后面直接接宾语，不需要介词"for"。

× I think that is appreciate to them.

✓ I think that is appreciation to them.

"appreciate"是动词，句中应使用名词"appreciation"。

× While singing I feel a strong feeling of and I really like to sing with others, sharing our happiness together, to sing out, to suggest out our stressful.

✓ While singing, I feel a strong feeling, and I really like to sing with others, sharing our happiness together, singing out, releasing our stress.

句子结构混乱，缺少名词"stress"，"suggest out"用词错误，应为"release"或"let out"。

× So I think it's happy.

✓ So I think it's happiness.

"happy"是形容词，句中应使用名词"happiness"。