Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に理由を述べることが重要です。例えば、"I don't like singing because I'm not confident singing in front of others. Also, I don't usually listen to music."のように表現しましょう。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not confident singing in front of others. Also, I don't usually listen to music, so I am not familiar with many songs.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。正しい文法を使い、具体的に過去の経験と今後の意欲を表現しましょう。例えば、"No, I haven't. I only took a music class at school. I want to improve my singing, so I plan to take lessons from a professional teacher."のように言えます。

例: No, I haven't. I only took a music class at school. I want to improve my singing, so I plan to take lessons from a professional teacher.

提案: 回答が意味不明で、文法的にも誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。例えば、"I want to sing for myself because singing helps me relax and feel happy."のように表現しましょう。

例: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me relax and feel happy.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で正確な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べましょう。例えば、"Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel joyful."のように言えます。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel joyful.

× I don't like singing. I'm not good at singing in front of people and.

✓ I don't like singing. I'm not good at singing in front of people.

The sentence ends with 'and' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× I usually don't listening to music so I don't know, listen to songs.

✓ I usually don't listen to music, so I don't know many songs.

After 'don't', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'listen to songs' needs to be connected properly with a comma and clearer phrasing.

× No I haven't. I only took a music class at the school.

✓ No, I haven't. I have only taken a music class at school.

The present perfect tense 'have taken' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'at the school' is better as 'at school' in this context.

× I want to be good at singing so I try to run How to sing from specialized teacher.

✓ I want to be good at singing, so I try to learn how to sing from a specialized teacher.

The phrase 'try to run How to sing' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'learn', and 'a specialized teacher' needs an article. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'so'.

× I want to buy myself, sing a song I.

✓ I want to sing a song for myself.

The original sentence misuses 'buy myself' and has an incorrect word order. The corrected sentence uses the correct pronoun and word order.

× If I feel I feel relaxed to sing a song, it's important to have a sing a song.

✓ If I feel relaxed singing a song, it's important to sing a song.

The sentence has repeated words and awkward phrasing. Simplifying and correcting the verb forms improves clarity.

× I think so. Sing a song is essential for people to be happiness.

✓ I think so. Singing songs is essential for people to be happy.

'Sing a song' should be 'Singing songs' as a gerund phrase. 'Happiness' is a noun, but the adjective 'happy' is needed after 'to be'.

× Songs is very potential to.

✓ Songs have a lot of potential.

'Songs' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'is'. Also, 'very potential to' is incorrect; 'have a lot of potential' is the correct expression.