Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
I'm crazy about saying, for example, I think every time I take a shower, and that's because singing is a good way to release pressure maybe.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Truth be told, I haven't learned about how to sing songs because I was a student years ago and now I can't have time to learn how to sing. Without study burden.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
The grateful people I want to sing for is my mother and my teacher because they help me a lot during my school days. I felt very grateful to them.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
As a matter of fact, it is true that seeing can bring upright feelings and give people emotional value. So I think when we sing, we can enjoy our life.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 50.0提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“crazy about saying”应为“crazy about singing”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免冗余。
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress, especially when I sing in the shower.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Without study burden”不符合语境。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。
例: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I was busy with my studies, and now I don't have enough free time.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答表达了感激之情，但句子结构有误，如主谓不一致。建议使用正确的语法结构，并适当丰富细节。
例: I would like to sing for my mother and my teacher because they supported me a lot during my school days, and I am very grateful to them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达不够自然。建议使用准确词汇并简洁表达观点。
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it lifts our mood and helps us enjoy life.
文法
× I'm crazy about saying, for example, I think every time I take a shower, and that's because singing is a good way to release pressure maybe.
✓ I'm crazy about singing, for example, I think every time I take a shower, and that's because singing is a good way to release pressure maybe.
动词短语中，'crazy about'后面应接动名词形式，'saying'应改为'singing'，因为句意是喜欢唱歌。
× Truth be told, I haven't learned about how to sing songs because I was a student years ago and now I can't have time to learn how to sing. Without study burden.
✓ Truth be told, I haven't learned how to sing songs because I was a student years ago and now I don't have time to learn how to sing without study burden.
句中'can't have time'用法不当，应改为'don't have time'表示现在没有时间。'Without study burden'应与前句连贯，放在句尾并与前句合并。
× The grateful people I want to sing for is my mother and my teacher because they help me a lot during my school days.
✓ The grateful people I want to sing for are my mother and my teacher because they help me a lot during my school days.
主语是复数'the grateful people'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。
× As a matter of fact, it is true that seeing can bring upright feelings and give people emotional value.
✓ As a matter of fact, it is true that singing can bring uplifting feelings and give people emotional value.
'seeing'应为'singing'，且形容词'upright'用错，应为'uplifting'表示令人振奋的感觉。
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