Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains a pronunciation error ('saying' instead of 'singing') and some awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question.

例: No, I don't like singing because I've never been taught how to sing properly. However, I can see why others enjoy it since it seems like a fun and creative activity.

提案: Your answer is clear but has some hesitations and repetition ('I can I can'). Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer smoother.

例: No, I have never learnt how to sing, but I hope to have the opportunity to take singing lessons in the future.

提案: Your answer is direct and relevant, but adding a reason or more detail would improve it. Also, avoid filler words like 'Uh' to sound more confident.

例: I want to sing for my best friend because they have always supported me and I think it would make them happy.

提案: There is a pronunciation mistake ('seeing' instead of 'singing'). Your answer is relevant but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details.

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions freely, which can improve their mental health and overall well-being.

× No, I don't like saying because I've never been taught how to sing, but I do understand if people like it because it seems interesting.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I've never been taught how to sing, but I do understand if people like it because it seems interesting.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing preferences or dislikes about activities. 'Saying' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context of the question about singing.

× No, I've never done that so but I hope I can I can have some chance in the future.

✓ No, I've never done that, but I hope I can have some chance in the future.

The sentence contains redundant conjunctions 'so but' and repeated words 'I can I can', which disrupt sentence flow. Removing 'so' and the repeated phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, seeing can bring happiness to people because it helps people express their emotions, which is good to their mental health.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps people express their emotions, which is good for their mental health.

The word 'seeing' is a pronoun error; the intended word is 'singing' to relate to the topic. Also, the preposition 'to' after 'good' should be 'for' to correctly express benefit to mental health.