Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和句子连贯性，避免使用不正确的词汇。

例: Yes, I am a big fan of singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，且句子不完整，缺少谓语动词。建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I learned to sing for about two years when I was a kid, and I really enjoyed it because I was good at it.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“appreciate about her”应为“appreciate her”，且“say some songs”应为“sing some songs”。建议注意固定搭配和词汇使用。

例: I want to sing for my grandma because she used to sing songs every evening when I was a child, and I really appreciate her.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“a good way to communication”应为“a good way to communicate”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and share their feelings with others, so it's a good way to communicate.

× Yes, I am a big fan of saying because I think singing can help me, I wonder and contribute to my relaxation.

✓ Yes, I am a big fan of singing because I think singing can help me relax and contribute to my relaxation.

这里'saying'是错误的动名词形式，应该用'singing'表示'唱歌'。另外，'I wonder'在这里不合适，应改为'relax'，使句子通顺。

× Yes, when I was a kid I had learned singing about two years.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I learned singing for about two years.

这里使用过去完成时'had learned'不合适，应该用一般过去时'learned'，因为句子中没有其他过去的动作需要先于此发生。

× I really enjoyed it because I really good at singing.

✓ I really enjoyed it because I am really good at singing.

句子缺少系动词'am'，导致语法错误。应补充'am'使句子完整。

× I really appreciate about her.

✓ I really appreciate her.

动词'appreciate'后不需要介词'about'，直接加宾语即可。

× So that's the reason why I want to say some songs for my grandma.

✓ So that's the reason why I want to sing some songs for my grandma.

动词'say'用错，应该用'sing'表示'唱歌'。

× So I think it's a good way to communication.

✓ So I think it's a good way to communicate.

'communication'是动词不定式'communicate'的名词形式，句中应使用动词不定式'communicate'，而不是名词'communication'。