Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议简化表达，直接回答喜欢唱歌的原因，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after training. For example, I often sing my favorite songs that match my mood to feel better.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，信息不明确。建议直接说明学唱歌的经历，并解释学习唱歌的原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I have always been interested in singing because it helps me express my emotions.

提案: 表达不清楚，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当。建议明确说明想为谁唱歌，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子和恰当的词汇。

例: I want to sing for my family and close friends because they support me and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them makes me feel special and helps me share my love through music.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用具体例子，并注意句子连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs alone or with others.

× Yes, I really enjoy singer.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing.

这里'singer'是名词，句中需要动名词形式'singing'来表示喜欢唱歌的动作。动名词用作宾语时，不能用名词形式。

× For example, when I finish training, my favorite song is daily life, My mood.

✓ For example, when I finish training, my favorite songs are about daily life and my mood.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词，且'song'应为复数形式'songs'，因为后面提到了多个主题。需要用连词'and'连接两个主题。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去式，'learned'是美式英语过去式。根据上下文选择统一时态，且此处用现在完成时，'learned'更常用。

× Yeah, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school I took part in the travel where receiving be bicycle training and learn about pick and writing Since I have always interested in my me because it's helped me explain emotion.

✓ Yeah, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a trip where I received bicycle training and learned about picking and writing. Since then, I have always been interested in singing because it helps me express emotions.

原句语法混乱，缺少主语和谓语，时态不一致，词汇使用错误。需要补充主语，调整时态，修正词汇拼写和表达，使句子通顺。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合英语习惯。

× I would like to thank for my family and classic friends singing for being feel special because they are supportivity and appreciate my effort which most live my to prefer better additionally share music with love.

✓ I would like to thank my family and close friends for singing, which makes me feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my effort. I prefer to share music with love to improve my life.

原句结构混乱，词汇错误，缺少连贯性。需要调整句子结构，修正词汇，明确表达感谢和分享音乐的意思。

× Yes, I believe saying I can definitely write happiness to people saying aloud to express express their emotion and can be great way to relieve strength.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing aloud helps express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

原句中'saying'应为'singing'，'write happiness'错误，应为'bring happiness'，重复使用'express'，'strength'应为'stress'。需要修正词汇和代词使用，使句子通顺。

× For example, many people feel of life and joyful when they sing their favorite songs, favorite song either alone or write others.

✓ For example, many people feel lively and joyful when they sing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.

原句表达不清，'feel of life'错误，应为'feel lively'，'favorite song'重复且语法错误，'write others'应为'with others'。需要调整词序和词汇，使句子通顺。