Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余，句子应更自然流畅。可以直接说“I like singing because it helps me relax and I enjoy it.”

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and I really enjoy it.

提案: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免重复表达。可以说“I have never learned to sing because I was more interested in drawing and didn’t have time.”

例: No, I have never learned to sing because I was more interested in drawing and didn’t have time.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免模糊表达。可以说“I want to sing for my parents and friends at family parties to celebrate special occasions.”

例: I want to sing for my parents and friends at family parties to celebrate special occasions.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，应更准确表达观点。可以说“Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps us relax and reduces stress. Singing also allows us to express various emotions.”

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps us relax and reduces stress. Singing also allows us to express various emotions.

× I really like because I enjoy singing and it can make me more relaxed.

✓ I really like it because I enjoy singing and it can make me more relaxed.

句子中缺少宾语，动词like后应接宾语。这里应加it作为宾语，表示“我真的喜欢它”。

× No, I never learned about how to sing because I really like drawing in the past and I have no time to learn about how to sing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because I really liked drawing in the past and I had no time to learn how to sing.

句子中描述过去的情况，动词时态应统一为过去时。like和have应改为liked和had。

× No, I never learned about how to sing because I really like drawing in the past and I have no time to learn about how to sing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because I really liked drawing in the past and I had no time to learn how to sing.

动词learn后不需要介词about，直接接动词不定式或名词短语。

× I want to sing for my parents and my friends in a family party.

✓ I want to sing for my parents and my friends at a family party.

表示在某个具体场合时，介词应使用at而不是in。

× We always have some good things and I will sing for them and to celebrate.

✓ We always have some good things, and I will sing for them to celebrate.

句子中“and to celebrate”结构不完整，应与前句连贯，去掉and使句子结构完整。

× Yes I agree with it because I think seeing can relax ourselves and makes us less stressful and is a good thing for us to do.

✓ Yes, I agree with it because I think singing can relax us, make us less stressed, and is a good thing for us to do.

ourselves用法不当，主语是第三人称复数，宾语应使用us；makes应与前面动词保持一致用原形make；stressful形容词用错，应使用过去分词stressed表示感到压力。

× And when we singing I we have many different feelings.

✓ And when we are singing, we have many different feelings.

动词进行时态缺少be动词，正确形式为are singing；句中多余的I应删除。