Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not good at it, but I enjoy listening to wonderful songs because they make me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，句子未结束。建议完整表达观点，注意时态一致，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing in primary school. Our teacher helped us discover our interests, and I really enjoyed music classes because we sang together and I gradually appreciated the beauty of music.

提案: 回答较好，但时态使用不够准确，且表达可以更流畅。建议注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they used to sing for me when I was a child, which made me feel loved. Now that I live far from home, I miss them a lot and want to express my love through song.

提案: 回答中多处词汇错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，完整表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness and enjoyment to people. For example, when people feel stressed, singing their favorite songs can help them relax. Also, singing connects people and helps express positive emotions.

× It will make make me feel enjoyable and happiness when I listen to wonderful a wonderful song.

✓ It will make me feel enjoyment and happiness when I listen to a wonderful song.

这里“enjoyable”是形容词，应该用名词“enjoyment”来表达“愉快的感觉”；“happiness”是不可数名词，前面不需要加冠词；“a wonderful song”中冠词位置错误，应为“a wonderful song”。

× I really enjoy enjoyed music class because we song together and I gradually found the beauty of the.

✓ I really enjoyed music class because we sang together and I gradually found the beauty of it.

“enjoyed”是过去时，前面不应有“enjoy”；“song”应为动词过去式“sang”；句子末尾缺少宾语，补充“it”使句子完整。

× Our teacher helps us to discover our interest and we had lots of interesting classes.

✓ Our teacher helped us to discover our interests and we had lots of interesting classes.

“interest”应为复数形式“interests”，表示多种兴趣；“helps”时态应与后文“had”一致，改为过去时“helped”。

× Our teacher helps us to discover our interest and we had lots of interesting classes.

✓ Our teacher helped us to discover our interests and we had lots of interesting classes.

“helps”应改为过去时“helped”，与“had”时态保持一致。

× I want to use a song to express how much I loved them.

✓ I want to use a song to express how much I love them.

表达现在的感情，动词应使用现在时“love”，而非过去时“loved”。

× Seeing always can bring happiness and enjoyment to people.

✓ Singing always can bring happiness and enjoyment to people.

“Seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌带来的快乐。

× Also, singing can connect with people to express positive.

✓ Also, singing can connect people and express positivity.

“connect with people to express positive”结构不完整，改为“connect people and express positivity”更通顺，且“positive”应改为名词形式“positivity”。