Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially at midnight because it's quiet and peaceful. Singing helps me relax and feel happy, and I think everyone can enjoy singing as a way to relieve stress.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习的经历，避免使用不准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I have learned to sing since I was a child. I took music lessons at school, which were enjoyable and helped me improve my singing skills.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，部分词汇使用不当。建议直接说明想为谁唱歌，并简要说明原因，使用更自然的表达。

例: I would like to sing for my mom because she has never heard me sing before. She enjoys artists like Jay Chou, so I think she would appreciate my singing.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，存在语法错误和不相关的词汇。建议简洁明了地表达唱歌带来快乐的原因，并避免使用不恰当的词汇。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and connect with others. It is a joyful way to communicate and share emotions.

× there are no human beings disturb me

✓ there are no human beings disturbing me

这里的动词需要用现在分词形式来修饰前面的复数名词human beings，表示正在发生的动作。

× it quite enjoyable

✓ it is quite enjoyable

缺少系动词is，形容词enjoyable前需要有系动词构成完整句子。

× release the street

✓ release stress

这里的street应为stress，意思是释放压力，属于词汇错误。

× sometimes their lesson which is music lesson that have teach us how to sing

✓ sometimes there are lessons, which are music lessons, that have taught us how to sing

动词teach的过去分词是taught，且主语lessons为复数，谓语动词用have taught。

× their lesson which is music lesson

✓ their lessons, which are music lessons

lesson应为复数lessons，与后面的复数谓语动词are保持一致。

× she has never listened my voice and rhythm

✓ she has never listened to my voice and rhythm

listen后面需要加介词to，表示听某物。

× share information algorithm between each other

✓ share information and algorithms with each other

share后面直接加宾语，且用with each other表示彼此之间。

× it's quite way to communicate with

✓ it's quite a way to communicate

communicate后面不需要with，且way前需要冠词a。