Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词有些错误，例如“release my pressure”应为“relieve my pressure”，句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和搭配，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieves my stress. Whenever I feel unhappy, singing makes me feel happier.

提案: 回答中后半部分“However, staying with my friends is very relaxing”与问题无关，显得跑题。建议回答时紧扣问题，避免无关内容。

例: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally because I believe not everyone needs to sing well unless they want to be a singer.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“support team”应为“support me”，“company on my side”应为“keep me company”。建议注意词汇搭配和句子连贯性。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she always supports me. She is not only my mother but also my friend. Whenever I feel unhappy, she keeps me company.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达混乱，如“Seeing can lift people's gifts”应为“Singing can lift people's spirits”，句子重复且不连贯。建议加强语法练习，注意句子结构和逻辑。

例: Yes, I do. Singing can lift people's spirits and help them relax. For example, when I feel unhappy, listening to my favorite song makes me feel much better.

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because singing could give me a sense of relaxation and it really release my pressure.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because singing could give me a sense of relaxation and it really releases my pressure.

动词release在这里主语是it，第三人称单数，动词应加-s变为releases。

× When I am unhappy, I would seem to be happy.

✓ When I am unhappy, I seem to be happy.

这里表达的是一般情况，不需要使用would，直接用一般现在时seem即可。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because I think it is not necessary for everyone to sing very well unless they want to be a singer.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because I think it is not necessary for everyone to sing very well unless they want to be singers.

复数形式singers更符合语境，因为指的是所有想成为歌手的人。

× However, staying with my friends is very relaxing.

✓ However, spending time with my friends is very relaxing.

这里用staying with my friends结构不太自然，通常用spending time with my friends表达“和朋友在一起”。

× I want to sing for my mother because she is always there to support team, to support me.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she is always there to support me.

support后面不需要加team，且team在此处无意义，应去掉。

× For me. She is not only a mother but also a friend.

✓ For me, she is not only a mother but also a friend.

For me后面应接逗号，不能单独成句。

× Whenever I am unhappy, she would company on my side.

✓ Whenever I am unhappy, she would accompany me by my side.

company用错，正确动词是accompany，且搭配应为accompany sb by one's side。

× Seeing can lift people's gifts and give people a sense of relaxation.

✓ Singing can lift people's spirits and give people a sense of relaxation.

Seeing应为Singing，且gifts应为spirits，意思是“唱歌能提升人们的精神”。

× When, for example, when I was when I am unhappy, if I could hear my favorite song, I would be very pleased.

✓ For example, when I am unhappy, if I hear my favorite song, I feel very pleased.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，调整为一般现在时表达习惯。