Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'it stress my emotions' nên là 'it relieves my stress' hoặc 'it helps me manage my emotions'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing even though I'm not a professional. Singing helps me relax and relieves my stress, especially after a long day. Sometimes, I sing along to my favorite songs at home or go to karaoke with friends. It's a fun way to connect with others and improve my mood.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời rất tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như 'Moreover' hoặc 'In addition'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ điệu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have. In the Vietnamese school curriculum, music is a subject in elementary school, so we were taught basic singing skills from a young age. Moreover, we learned how to sing traditional songs, keep rhythm, and perform in front of the class. It was a fun part of school that helped me feel more confident.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn ngắn gọn và có ý chính, nhưng bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như câu ghép không đúng (ví dụ: 'I usually sing just for myself, it's something I do...' nên tách thành hai câu hoặc dùng liên từ). Bạn cũng nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I usually sing just for myself because it helps me relax and lift my mood, especially when I'm alone at home. I don't often perform for others since I enjoy the personal feeling singing gives me.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'a right sort of tribal' không đúng nghĩa). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can be a great way for people to express their emotions and reduce stress. Whether singing alone, at karaoke with friends, or just listening to others sing, it helps people connect and often brings happiness and smiles to their faces.

× Singing helps me relax and it stress my emotions, especially after a stressful day.

✓ Singing helps me relax and it stresses my emotions, especially after a stressful day.

The subject 'it' requires the verb to be in the third person singular form, so 'stress' should be 'stresses' to agree with the singular subject.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is commonly 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Using 'learned' is more standard in this context.

× I don't really seem to perform for others, I just enjoy the feeling it gives me.

✓ I don't really perform for others; I just enjoy the feeling it gives me.

The phrase 'seem to perform' is unnecessary and awkward here. Removing 'seem to' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Yes, definitely singing can be a right sort of tribal for people singing and for those listening it helps people express their emotions, reduce stress, and connect with others whether it's singing alone, at karaoke, with friends, or even just listening to others voice, it often brings a smile to.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can be a right sort of tribal experience for people singing and for those listening. It helps people express their emotions, reduce stress, and connect with others whether it's singing alone, at karaoke, with friends, or even just listening to others' voices. It often brings a smile to people's faces.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear meaning. Breaking it into multiple sentences and correcting phrases like 'others voice' to 'others' voices' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.