Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复，并且使句子更简洁流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express myself and relieves stress. I often sing with my friends since we all share this interest.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因或经历，使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because my mother loves singing and encouraged me to learn. Since then, I have enjoyed singing a lot.

提案: 回答中表达了想为父母和朋友唱歌的意愿，但句子结构重复且部分表达不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达想法，并适当使用连接词使内容更流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my parents and friends because singing allows me to express my emotions and share my thoughts with them.

提案: 回答中多处用词错误和句子不完整，影响表达效果。建议使用准确的词汇，构建完整句子，并清晰表达唱歌带来快乐的原因。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and ideas, which can be very relaxing.

× Yes, I have learned to see when I was younger because my mother is like to sing with the influence on her.

✓ Yes, I learned to sing when I was younger because my mother liked singing and influenced me.

这里的时态使用不正确。'have learned' 应该用一般过去时 'learned'，因为动作发生在过去的具体时间点。'to see' 应为 'to sing'，且句子结构混乱，需调整。母亲喜欢唱歌应使用过去时 'liked'，表示过去的习惯。

× Yes, I have learned to see when I was younger because my mother is like to sing with the influence on her.

✓ Yes, I learned to sing when I was younger because my mother liked singing and influenced me.

短语 'with the influence on her' 用法错误，应改为 'influenced me'，表示母亲对我有影响。

× I like seeing too. So my mother lent me to learn things and I like singing very much.

✓ I like singing too. So my mother encouraged me to learn, and I like singing very much.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，'lent me to learn things' 用法不当，应改为 'encouraged me to learn'，更符合语境。

× Maybe I want to sing for my parents and my friends. I think they can. I think they can express my emotions and it's a way to express our ideas.

✓ Maybe I want to sing for my parents and my friends. I think it can express my emotions and it's a way to express our ideas.

'they can' 指代不明，应改为 'it can'，指代 'singing'，更符合语法和语义。

× Yes, I think things can bring happiness to people. Things a good way for people to express their emotions and express their ideas so they can. Let them relax.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is a good way for people to express their emotions and ideas, so it can help them relax.

句子结构混乱，'things' 应为 'singing'，缺少动词 'is'，句子不完整，需调整使其完整通顺。