Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有多处拼写错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，"Saying"应为"Singing"，这影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意单词拼写，避免错误。同时，回答中句子结构较为简单，且部分表达重复，建议使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm at home. Whenever I feel angry or upset, singing my favorite songs helps me feel happier and more relaxed. It is a great way to calm down and find peace of mind.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子中存在语法错误，如"that is the song now become my favorite"应为"that song has now become my favorite"。建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Oh yes, of course I've learned how to sing before. I had classes with Miss Mary, who taught me a song called "On My Way." I remember it clearly because that song has now become my favorite.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，如"Thing"应为"This"，且"I don't really think for our specific person"表达不清晰，建议改为更自然的表达方式。此外，句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词提高连贯性。

例: Well, I don't usually sing for a specific person. I prefer to sing for myself, especially when I feel angry or stressed. This helps me relax and express my emotions, which makes me feel calmer and more peaceful afterwards.

提案: 回答中多次出现拼写错误，如"saying"应为"singing"，且句子未完整，导致表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和句子完整性，避免句子中断，使用更多具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For example, recent research shows that music therapy, including singing, is very effective in treating certain mental health conditions. Besides seeking help, singing allows people to relax and express their emotions, which improves their mood.

× Yes, I really enjoy seeing, especially when I'm at home, whenever I feel angry or naughty.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm at home, whenever I feel angry or naughty.

动词enjoy后面应该接动名词形式（-ing），这里seeing应改为singing，因为句意是喜欢唱歌。

× Saying my favorite song helps me feel happier and more relaxed.

✓ Singing my favorite song helps me feel happier and more relaxed.

动词saying是错误的，正确的动名词形式是singing，表示唱歌。

× Oh yes, of course I've learned how to sing before.

✓ Oh yes, of course I've learnt how to sing before.

learn的过去分词在英式英语中常用learnt，保持时态一致性。

× I had classes with Miss Mary, who taught me the song called On My Way.

✓ I have had classes with Miss Mary, who taught me the song called On My Way.

根据上下文，表达过去经历时应使用现在完成时have had。

× I remember it clearly because that is the song now become my favorite.

✓ I remember it clearly because that is the song that has now become my favorite.

现在完成时表示从过去到现在的变化，且缺少关系代词that。

× Well, I don't really think for our specific person.

✓ Well, I don't really think of a specific person.

动词think后应接介词of，且表达特定某人应使用a specific person。

× Thing helps me to relax and express my emotions which makes me feel calmer and more peaceful afterwards.

✓ This helps me to relax and express my emotions which makes me feel calmer and more peaceful afterwards.

thing应为this，指代前文内容，且单数形式。

× Yes, I believe saying can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

动词believe后接动名词，saying应改为singing。

× For example, recent research shows that music therapy, including saying, is very effective in treating certain mental health conditions.

✓ For example, recent research shows that music therapy, including singing, is very effective in treating certain mental health conditions.

including后应接动名词，saying应改为singing。

× Besides seeking help, people relax and express their emotions, which makes them.

✓ Besides seeking help, people relax and express their emotions, which makes them feel better.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，补充feel better使句子完整。