Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid repeating the same phrase 'singing' multiple times and use linking words to make your response smoother.

例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I'm not really interested in it, and I feel that my voice isn't suited for it.

提案: Avoid repeating information from previous answers. Instead, provide a fresh response with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail using linking words.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons since I lack interest in it and don't find singing enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and linking words.

例: I don't usually sing for anyone because I prefer listening to music rather than performing.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use simple, clear sentences with appropriate vocabulary and linking words to express your opinion effectively.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it creates a positive atmosphere, and many people enjoy both singing and listening to music.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I am not really fond of performing music but and I only enjoy listening it.

✓ As I have mentioned earlier, I am not really fond of performing music, and I only enjoy listening to it.

The conjunction 'but and' is incorrect; only one conjunction should be used to connect clauses. Also, the verb 'enjoy' is followed by the gerund form with the preposition 'to' in 'listening to it'. The correct conjunction here is 'and', and the phrase should be 'listening to it'.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I am not really fond of performing music but and I only enjoy listening it.

✓ As I have mentioned earlier, I am not really fond of performing music, and I only enjoy listening to it.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. The phrase 'listening it' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to it'.

× Yes definitely singing photons smile on a person face as a as it have a different vibe and people enjoy listening and as well as singing.

✓ Yes, definitely singing puts a smile on a person's face as it has a different vibe, and people enjoy listening as well as singing.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'singing photons smile' is incorrect; 'singing puts a smile' is correct. Also, 'a person face' should be 'a person's face' to show possession. 'It have' should be 'it has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.