Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构较为重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduces my stress. Additionally, it improves my breathing and overall physical health.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且信息不连贯。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复和错误，并且提供更清晰的内容。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I did learn to play the guzheng, a traditional Chinese instrument, when I was a child.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并且表达更自然。

例: I would like to sing for my parents and friends because singing creates a relaxed atmosphere and brings happiness to everyone.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式错误，且表达略显重复。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并丰富表达内容。

例: Definitely. Singing is a relaxing activity that boosts my enthusiasm and spreads joy to people around me.

× Oh, I. Oh no, I never learned how to sing, but I learned how to play Gujarat when I was a child.

✓ Oh, I never learned how to sing, but I learned how to play Gujian when I was a child.

句子中"Oh, I."是不完整的句子，缺少谓语动词，属于句子结构错误。应删除多余的"Oh, I."使句子完整。

× My parents and my friend, since I believe that singing a song is really relaxed things that makes everyone happier and more exciting.

✓ My parents and my friends, since I believe that singing a song is a really relaxing thing that makes everyone happier and more excited.

"relaxed things"用词错误，应为"relaxing thing"，因为singing是使人放松的动作，形容词应为现在分词形式"relaxing"。"more exciting"应改为"more excited"，因为这里描述的是人的感受，应该用形容词"excited"。此外，"my friend"应为复数"my friends"，因为通常指多个人。

× For example, when I sing it help me feel more enthusiasm and brings joy to those around me.

✓ For example, when I sing, it helps me feel more enthusiastic and brings joy to those around me.

主语"it"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故"help"改为"helps"。"enthusiasm"是名词，句中应使用形容词"enthusiastic"来修饰感受。