Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。英語の文法と語順を正しくし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I like singing because it gives me energy and makes me feel happy.」のように簡潔に表現すると良いです。

例: Yes, I like singing because it gives me energy and makes me feel happy.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、「on the bathroom」は不自然です。「in the bathroom」が正しい表現です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、文をつなげるとより自然になります。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I like singing, so I practice every day in the bathroom.

提案: 文法ミスが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問の意図は「誰のために歌いたいか」なので、答えを明確にしましょう。また、理由を述べる際は文を完結させ、形容詞の使い方に注意してください。

例: I want to sing for Taylor Swift because her voice is very beautiful and cute.

提案: 回答がほとんど意味を成していません。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や具体例を簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。例えば、「Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps them express their feelings.」のように答えましょう。

例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps them express their feelings.

× Yes, I really like singing because singing is given power for me if people's singing. I wanted to.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because singing gives me power when people sing. I want to.

The original sentence misuses the verb form 'is given' and has unclear phrasing. 'Singing is given power for me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'singing gives me power'. Also, 'if people's singing' is unclear and should be 'when people sing'. The phrase 'I wanted to' should be 'I want to' to match the present tense context.

× No, I have never learned to sing, but I like singing, so I practice every day on the bathroom.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing, but I like singing, so I practice every day in the bathroom.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'the bathroom'. The correct preposition is 'in' because one is inside the bathroom when practicing singing.

× I want to sing Taylor Swift because she voice is so cute and beautiful and she is very.

✓ I want to sing like Taylor Swift because her voice is so cute and beautiful and she is very talented.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'she voice' instead of 'her voice'. Also, 'I want to sing Taylor Swift' is unclear; it should be 'I want to sing like Taylor Swift'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'she is very', so adding 'talented' completes the thought.