Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在一些语法错误和用词不当，如“seeing”应为“singing”，以及句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用，同时避免拼写错误。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I feel upset or stressed, singing my favorite songs always lifts my mood and makes me feel happier.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但表达略显口语化且有语法问题，如“a good vocal control”应为“good vocal control”。建议使用更准确的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I learned some basic singing skills from my primary school music teacher. However, it was quite challenging for me to control my voice well, so I didn't master it completely.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“when I saw”应为“when I sing”。建议注意时态和拼写的准确性，同时可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I haven't thought about this before, but if I had to choose, I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are always supportive and appreciative. When I sing for them, the atmosphere is encouraging and warm.

提案: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确的单词，并通过连接词使句子更流畅和逻辑清晰。

例: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Not only does it allow individuals to express their emotions to others, but it also serves as an excellent way to relieve stress.

× For example, when I was upset or stressed, seeing is my favorite song can make me happier and lifted my mood.

✓ For example, when I was upset or stressed, singing my favorite song could make me happier and lift my mood.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the correct form is the present participle 'singing' to indicate the action of performing the song. Also, 'lifted' should be in base form 'lift' after 'can' or 'could' to maintain correct verb form.

× For example, when I was upset or stressed, seeing is my favorite song can make me happier and lifted my mood.

✓ For example, when I was upset or stressed, singing my favorite song could make me happier and lift my mood.

The verb 'lifted' is incorrectly used in past tense after 'can' or 'could'; it should be the base form 'lift' to match modal verb usage.

× Yeah, when I was young, my music teacher in primary school taught some basic skills, but it's a little bit challenging for me to have a good vocal control, so I didn't learn it very well.

✓ Yeah, when I was young, my music teacher in primary school taught me some basic skills, but it was a little bit challenging for me to have good vocal control, so I didn't learn it very well.

The phrase 'it's a little bit challenging' should be in past tense 'it was' to match the past context. Also, 'taught some basic skills' is incomplete; 'taught me some basic skills' is clearer.

× Yeah, when I was young, my music teacher in primary school taught some basic skills, but it's a little bit challenging for me to have a good vocal control, so I didn't learn it very well.

✓ Yeah, when I was young, my music teacher in primary school taught me some basic skills, but it was a little bit challenging for me to have good vocal control, so I didn't learn it very well.

The pronoun 'me' is needed after 'taught' to indicate who received the skills. Also, 'a good vocal control' should be 'good vocal control' as 'control' is uncountable here.

× Well, I never thought about this question before, but if I had to say I would like to sing for my family and close friends who are always supportive and appreciative of my effort. There is an encouraging and warm atmosphere when I saw.

✓ Well, I never thought about this question before, but if I had to say, I would like to sing for my family and close friends who are always supportive and appreciative of my effort. There is an encouraging and warm atmosphere when I sing.

The verb 'saw' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing' to indicate the present action that creates the atmosphere. Also, a comma is needed after 'if I had to say' for clarity.

× Of course, I think seeing can bring happiness to people not only because it can express emotion to others, it also show an excellent way for individuals to relieve their stress.

✓ Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people not only because it can express emotion to others, it also shows an excellent way for individuals to relieve their stress.

The word 'seeing' should be 'singing' to refer to the action of singing. Also, 'show' should be 'shows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.