Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forget about my suggest”应为“forget about my stress”或“forget my worries”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且避免句子不完整。

例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me forget about my stress. For example, after a long day at work, singing a song makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，如“I haven't learned to sing properly yet, but I plan to take singing lessons in the future.”

例: I haven't learned to sing properly yet, but I plan to take singing lessons in the future.

提案: 回答重复且表达不清晰，“relaxing issue”用词不当。建议简洁明了地表达自己的想法，避免重复。

例: I want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy my free time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“feel so happiness”和“could be bring”。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更流畅。

例: Yes, of course. When I listen to my favorite singer's songs, I feel very happy. Therefore, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me forget about my suggest.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me forget about my stress.

原句中'suggest'用法错误，应该使用名词'stress'表示压力。这里是形容词或名词使用错误，需用正确的名词表达意思。

× For example, after a long day at work, singing a song makes me feel comfortable and.

✓ For example, after a long day at work, singing a song makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

原句句子结构不完整，'comfortable and'后缺少形容词，导致句子不完整。需要补充形容词'relaxed'使句子完整。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语。根据上下文统一使用美式英语，改为'learned'。

× I haven't learned how to sing correctly, but later I think I will have a class in how to sing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing correctly, but later I think I will take a class on how to sing.

'have a class in'用法不当，正确表达是'take a class on'，表示参加课程。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合英语习惯，故不做修改。

× I want to sing for myself because I think it's a very relaxing issue for myself, so I want to sing for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think it's very relaxing for me, so I want to sing for myself.

'issue'用法错误，应该用形容词'relaxing'描述感觉；'for myself'重复且不自然，改为'for me'更合适。

× Yes, of course, when I listened to my favorite singer song, I feel so happiness.

✓ Yes, of course, when I listen to my favorite singer's song, I feel so happy.

'listened'时态与后文'feel'不一致，应改为一般现在时'listen'；'singer song'缺少所有格，应为'singer's song'；'happiness'是名词，需用形容词'happy'修饰感受。

× So I think it could be bring happiness to people.

✓ So I think it could bring happiness to people.

'could be bring'结构错误，情态动词后应直接接动词原形，改为'could bring'。