Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，表达不够流畅自然。建议减少口头语，直接表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更连贯。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it, but I enjoy listening to my friends sing because their voices are pleasant.

提案: 回答结构较为简单，表达有些重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇描述学习经历，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I learned singing during music lessons in both primary and secondary school, but I didn't practice much, so I'm not very skilled at it.

提案: 回答中有重复和不确定表达，缺乏具体细节。建议明确表达意图，减少重复，并举例说明。

例: I usually like to sing for my friends, especially on their birthdays or other special occasions, to make them feel happy.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且有些重复。建议使用更多连接词和具体描述，使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Even though I'm not skilled at singing, I enjoy listening to my friends sing because it lifts my mood and creates a joyful atmosphere.

× I like, listen to other people's like my friends to sing and.

✓ I like listening to other people, like my friends, sing.

这里动词like后面应该接动名词形式listening，而不是动词原形listen。动词like后接动名词表示喜欢做某事。

× I've learned how to sing in music lessons in primary school and secondary school, but I didn't learn it so well so I'm not so skilled to sing actually.

✓ I've learned how to sing in music lessons in primary school and secondary school, but I didn't learn it very well, so I'm not very skilled at singing actually.

这里使用了过去时didn't learn，后面接so well不太自然，改为very well更合适。同时，表达技能时用skilled at doing sth更准确。

× I'm not so skilled to sing actually.

✓ I'm not so skilled at singing actually.

形容词skilled后面应接介词at，表示擅长某事，后面动词用动名词形式。

× I think in most time I think for my friends and maybe during their birthdays or have some special days, but actually I don't think so much.

✓ I think most of the time I sing for my friends, maybe during their birthdays or on some special days, but actually I don't think about it much.

短语most of the time更常用，表示大多数时间。介词for my friends表示为朋友唱歌，during their birthdays正确，on some special days更合适。最后don't think so much应改为don't think about it much，更符合表达习惯。

× I think singing can bring happiness to people. Although I'm not so skilled with this but I'm happy to listen to my friends singing to me and I think this very good to listen to others.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people. Although I'm not so skilled at it, I'm happy to listen to my friends singing to me and I think it's very good to listen to others.

形容词skilled后应接介词at，表示擅长某事。句中this应改为it，指代前文内容。句子中缺少it作为主语，I think it's very good更完整。