Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Twoja odpowiedź jest zrozumiała, ale zawiera powtórzenia i błędy gramatyczne, które wpływają na naturalność wypowiedzi. Staraj się mówić krócej i bardziej precyzyjnie, unikając powtarzania słów i poprawiając gramatykę.

例: Actually, I don't like singing because I'm terrible at it. I never learned how to sing, and when I try, I think I sound bad, which annoys others.

提案: Twoja odpowiedź jest niejasna i zawiera błędy gramatyczne oraz niepoprawną składnię. Staraj się odpowiadać bezpośrednio na pytanie, używając prostych i poprawnych zdań oraz łączników, aby wypowiedź była spójna.

例: No, I haven't. In primary school, we had some singing lessons, but they were very basic, and I only sang once in front of the class.

提案: Twoja odpowiedź jest zrozumiała, ale brakuje jej spójności i precyzji. Użyj łączników, aby lepiej połączyć zdania i wyrazić swoje myśli bardziej naturalnie.

例: Actually, I don't know because I'm not into singing. However, if I had to choose, I would probably sing for Michael Jackson, although it might be a terrible experience for the audience.

提案: Twoja odpowiedź jest dobra, ale zawiera drobne błędy gramatyczne i powtórzenia. Staraj się używać poprawnej gramatyki i łączników, aby wypowiedź była bardziej naturalna i płynna.

例: Of course. In Africa, people sing a lot, so I believe singing can bring happiness into your life, even if you are not a good singer.

× Actually, I don't like seeing I'm I'm terrible at singing.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing because I'm terrible at it.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' instead of 'seeing'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and repeated 'I'm'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I never learned how to sing so I I hear myself really bad at it and a lot of people find it annoying.

✓ I never learned how to sing, so I hear myself really badly at it and a lot of people find it annoying.

The adverb 'badly' should be used to modify the verb 'hear' instead of the adjective 'bad'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× No, I haven't in the primary school we have some lessons but those who are only one thinks that was was singed in front of our class and nothing special.

✓ No, I haven't. In primary school, we had some lessons, but the only thing was singing in front of our class and nothing special.

The sentence had tense inconsistency and unclear phrasing. 'Have' should be followed by a past participle, so 'haven't' needs an object or be rephrased. 'Have' changed to 'had' for past tense. 'Singed' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The sentence was split for clarity.

× Of course, in Africa the people sings a lot, so I believe singing can bring happiness into your life even you are not, you are not a good singer.

✓ Of course, in Africa, people sing a lot, so I believe singing can bring happiness into your life even if you are not a good singer.

The verb 'sing' should be in base form 'sing' to agree with plural subject 'people'. Also, 'even you are not' is incorrect; it should be 'even if you are not' to express condition properly.