Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，如"We honestly am"应为"I am"，并且表达不够自然。建议使用简单正确的句子表达自己的观点，同时避免重复和语法错误。

例: I like singing, but I am not very good at it. I usually sing when I am in the shower because it makes me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅，"didn't learn a lot of about singing"语法错误且不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并且可以补充一些具体细节。

例: Yes, I learned some singing lessons in primary and middle school, but I didn't study it in depth.

提案: 回答较为自然且直接，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

例: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel shy and embarrassed when singing in front of others.

提案: 回答中有很多重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇和句子结构。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and enjoy their hobbies.

× We honestly am a bit of off key so I just like singing when I am shower.

✓ I honestly am a bit off key so I just like singing when I am in the shower.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，动词应使用单数形式“am”，而不是“are”。另外，短语“a bit of off key”应改为“a bit off key”，并且“when I am shower”应改为“when I am in the shower”，因为“shower”前需要介词“in”。

× Well, I just learned in my primary school and middle school, and actually I didn't learn a lot of about singing.

✓ Well, I just learned in my primary school and middle school, and actually I didn't learn a lot about singing.

短语“a lot of about singing”中“of”多余，应去掉，正确表达为“a lot about singing”。

× Well, I just want to sing for myself because I feel a bit shy and embarrassed in front of other people.

✓ Well, I just want to sing for myself because I feel a bit shy and embarrassed in front of other people.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Sure thing can bring happiness to people in many aspects like like when you singing you can show your show your hobbies and your your good wise. Oh yes.

✓ Sure, singing can bring happiness to people in many aspects, like when you sing you can show your hobbies and your good side. Oh yes.

“Sure thing can bring”应改为“Sure, singing can bring”，使句子主语明确且语法正确。“when you singing”应改为“when you sing”，动词应为一般现在时。“show your show your hobbies and your your good wise”重复且用词错误，应改为“show your hobbies and your good side”。