Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Actually, I love singing because it is one of my favorite activities in my leisure time, and I enjoy it as a way to express my feelings and relieve stress after a long day. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed and happy.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Actually also I really love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I've never taken any form of singing lessons since I am still a student, my days are usually packed with classes and homework. However, in the future if I have more free time, I would definitely like to learn how to sing.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
To be honest, I don't like singing in front of others, but I prefer to sing alone because it gives me a sense of tranquility and boosts my confidence. When I sing myself, I can fully immerse myself in the melody and express my emotions without feeling nervous. This way, I can focus better and improve my singing.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Actually, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps relieve stress and uplift their mood. For instance, many people enjoy singing with friends or family during celebrations, which creates A joyful atmosphere. Moreover, singing allows individuals to convey their emotions and.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, after a stressful day, singing my favorite songs makes me feel happier and more peaceful.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 80.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước và tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons yet because my schedule is quite busy with school. However, I hope to learn singing in the future when I have more free time.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 90.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt về mặt nội dung và cấu trúc, tuy nhiên bạn có thể thêm một câu mở đầu ngắn gọn để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước khi giải thích thêm.
例: I prefer to sing alone rather than in front of others because it helps me feel calm and confident. When I sing by myself, I can focus better and express my feelings freely.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn bị ngắt quãng và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên hoàn thành ý tưởng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn.
例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it relieves stress and lifts people's spirits. For example, singing with friends during parties creates a joyful and lively atmosphere.
文法
× Actually also I really love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
✓ Actually, I also really love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
The adverb 'also' is misplaced. It should be placed after the introductory word 'Actually' and separated by a comma to improve sentence clarity and flow.
× I've never taken any form of singing lessons since I am still a student, my days are usually packed with classes and homework.
✓ I've never taken any form of singing lessons since I am still a student; my days are usually packed with classes and homework.
The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It should be separated by a semicolon or split into two sentences to correct the sentence structure.
× When I sing myself, I can fully immerse myself in the melody and express my emotions without feeling nervous.
✓ When I sing alone, I can fully immerse myself in the melody and express my emotions without feeling nervous.
The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used after 'sing'. The correct expression is 'sing alone' or 'sing by myself' to indicate singing without others.
× which creates A joyful atmosphere.
✓ which creates a joyful atmosphere.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence and not a proper noun.
× Moreover, singing allows individuals to convey their emotions and.
✓ Moreover, singing allows individuals to convey their emotions.
The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and'. The conjunction 'and' should be removed to complete the sentence properly.
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