Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Oh well, I don't like singing because I think I usually have to face some difficulties when singing some high notes, so that's why singing is not right up my street. I usually do other important things when I have a bad time.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Oh well, as I said, singing is not right up my street. So that's why when I have spare time I normally do some other important things. And I have never enrolled any music courses, I just attend other classes like mathematics or literatures.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Uh well if I have to sing I will choose my sister because she is the same generation for me. So if I have any mistake I think she will empathy with me. So that's why I am not I don't feel shy.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Well, definitely yes, because you know, when singing, people can temporarily forget all the pressures from their daily life through some interesting melodies or some rhythm. And yeah, that's my answer.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
例: I don't like singing because I find it difficult to hit high notes. Therefore, I usually avoid singing and prefer to focus on other activities when I'm feeling down.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước rồi mới giải thích thêm. Câu trả lời hiện tại hơi dài và có phần lặp ý. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: "literature" thay vì "literatures") và tránh dùng cụm từ không tự nhiên như "right up my street" quá nhiều lần.
例: No, I have never learned how to sing or taken any music classes. Instead, I usually spend my free time studying subjects like mathematics and literature.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "empathy" nên là "empathize" hoặc "understand"). Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu ngắn gọn hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: If I had to sing, I would choose my sister because she is close to my age. She would understand my mistakes, so I wouldn't feel shy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý rõ ràng nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh dùng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "you know" hay "and yeah". Bạn cũng nên dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, súc tích hơn.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people forget their daily stresses through enjoyable melodies and rhythms.
文法
× I usually do other important things when I have a bad time.
✓ I usually do other important things when I am having a bad time.
The phrase 'have a bad time' is better expressed in the continuous form 'am having a bad time' to indicate an ongoing experience. Using the present continuous tense here is more natural and grammatically correct.
× I have never enrolled any music courses, I just attend other classes like mathematics or literatures.
✓ I have never enrolled in any music courses; I just attend other classes like mathematics or literature.
The verb 'enroll' requires the preposition 'in' when referring to courses. Also, 'literatures' is incorrect; the uncountable noun 'literature' should be used. A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses properly.
× she is the same generation for me.
✓ she is from the same generation as me.
The correct preposition to express belonging to the same generation is 'from' and the comparison uses 'as' not 'for'. The phrase 'the same generation for me' is incorrect.
× So if I have any mistake I think she will empathy with me.
✓ So if I make any mistakes, I think she will empathize with me.
'Empathy' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'empathize'. Also, 'have any mistake' should be 'make any mistakes' to express committing errors. The sentence needs these corrections for proper grammar and meaning.
× So that's why I am not I don't feel shy.
✓ So that's why I don't feel shy.
The phrase 'I am not I don't feel shy' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't feel shy'. The conjunction 'not' is unnecessary here.
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