Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
To be honest, I don't like singing because I don't think my voice is good enough to sing and I don't wanna take joy from out of the my friends. That's why I don't prefer singing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Actually no 'cause it's never been a priority in my life. However, I kinda always wanted to sing better and to be honest, I'm not even sure that maybe I'm using my voice correctly.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I wanna sing for my girlfriend and for my friends. Maybe one day I will become a very good singer if I study on how to improve my singing skills.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Of course, in Ottoman Empire, people were using music and singing as an instrument to heal people. They were believing that music can heal people's soul. That's why I agree with this idea.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. "I don't wanna take joy from out of the my friends" ifadesi anlaşılması zor. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevabınızı 3-4 cümle ile sınırlı tutup, neden sevmediğinizi daha net açıklayabilirsiniz.
例: I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. Also, I feel shy when I sing in front of my friends. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in public.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınızda samimi bir ifade var ancak "kinda" gibi günlük konuşma ifadeleri yerine daha resmi ifadeler tercih edin. Ayrıca, cümle yapılarınızı daha net ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.
例: No, I have never learned how to sing because it has never been a priority for me. However, I have always wanted to improve my singing skills, and I am not sure if I am using my voice correctly.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: Cevabınız açık ve doğrudan ancak "wanna" gibi gündelik ifadeler yerine daha uygun kelimeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.
例: I would like to sing for my girlfriend and my friends. Maybe one day, if I study and practice, I will become a very good singer.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 80.0提案: Cevabınızda tarihsel bir örnek vermeniz güzel ancak cümle yapılarında bazı hatalar var. "were using" yerine "used" ve "were believing" yerine "believed" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi bağlaçlarla daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz.
例: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, during the Ottoman Empire, people used music and singing as a way to heal others. They believed that music could heal the soul, so I agree with this idea.
文法
× I don't wanna take joy from out of the my friends.
✓ I don't wanna take joy out of my friends.
The phrase 'take joy from out of the my friends' contains redundant and incorrect prepositions. The correct preposition to express deriving joy from someone is 'out of'. Also, the definite article 'the' before 'my friends' is unnecessary. The corrected phrase is 'take joy out of my friends'.
× I don't wanna take joy from out of the my friends.
✓ I don't wanna take joy out of my friends.
The phrase 'the my friends' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive pronoun and does not require the definite article 'the'. Using both together is redundant and grammatically incorrect.
× Maybe one day I will become a very good singer if I study on how to improve my singing skills.
✓ Maybe one day I will become a very good singer if I study how to improve my singing skills.
The verb 'study' is not followed by the preposition 'on' when it is followed by a clause starting with 'how'. The correct form is 'study how to improve', not 'study on how to improve'.
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