Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些词汇使用不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me relieve stress. When I sing, I can immerse myself in the music and forget about my worries.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确表达自己的学习计划。

例: To be honest, I have never taken singing lessons before, but I want to learn how to sing. I plan to take singing classes soon to improve my skills.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和拼写错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'）。建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，使表达更准确流畅。

例: I want to sing a song for my mother because she took great care of me when I was a child. She always supported and inspired me to try new things, and I am very grateful for everything she has done. Singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

提案: 回答中多次出现'seeing'错误，应为'singing'，且句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，使用完整句子，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I think singing can really bring happiness to people. In my opinion, singing helps people relieve stress and improve their mood. It is very useful for maintaining good mental health.

× I feel very happy and I can get rid of my stress.

✓ I felt very happy and I could get rid of my stress.

这里描述的是过去的经历，动词时态应使用过去时。将“feel”改为“felt”，“can”改为“could”符合时态一致性。

× I can have an immersive environmental about myself.

✓ I can have an immersive environment around myself.

“environmental”是形容词，需用名词“environment”。“about myself”用法不当，改为“around myself”更符合表达环境的意思。

× I don't learn how to sing before, but I want to learn it and I plan to.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing before, but I want to learn it and I plan to.

“before”表示过去经历，需用现在完成时态“haven't learned”而非一般现在时“don't learn”。

× And I plan to take things license before I pass the exam.

✓ And I plan to take the singing license before I pass the exam.

“things license”表达不清，应为“singing license”。缺少冠词“the”。

× she took great care for me when I was a child

✓ she took great care of me when I was a child

固定搭配是“take care of someone”，不能用“care for”。

× and I very grateful for everything she has done.

✓ and I am very grateful for everything she has done.

缺少系动词“am”，导致句子不完整。

× Seeing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

✓ Singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

“Seeing”应为“Singing”，且“for her”用法正确。

× Yeah, I think seeing can really bring happiness to people.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can really bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，语义错误。

× From my perspective, seeing can help people get rid of stress and adjust people's emotion.

✓ From my perspective, singing can help people get rid of stress and adjust people's emotions.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× Is very useful to to change people's mental.

✓ It is very useful to change people's mental state.

句子缺少主语，应加“It is”。“mental”需补充名词“state”使表达完整。