Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用简单且正确的句子表达你的观点，并避免冗余。可以先直接回答喜欢唱歌的原因，然后补充具体情境。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel comfortable. However, I usually sing alone at home since I don't have much time to practice. Sometimes, I even sing while taking a bath.

提案: 回答中语法和表达混乱，建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习经历，避免不相关内容。

例: When I was a child, I learned to play the piano and some basic chords, so I know a little about music. However, I have never taken formal singing lessons.

提案: 回答表达了想法，但语法和用词不准确。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达愿望，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I would like to sing for my favorite singer, Jackson Wang, because his songs always encourage me and inspire me. If I had the chance, I would love to sing with him.

提案: 回答不够清晰，存在词汇错误。建议直接表达唱歌带来快乐的观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: I think singing is a great way for people to express themselves and have fun. It can bring happiness and comfort to both singers and listeners.

× So I just singing for myself in a private primary storm.

✓ So I just sing for myself in a private primary storm.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here; after 'just' the base form 'sing' should be used to indicate a habitual action. The correct form is 'I just sing'.

× Sometimes I just singing while I'm breathe I'm bathing.

✓ Sometimes I just sing while I'm breathing or bathing.

The verb 'singing' should be 'sing' to match the auxiliary 'just' indicating habitual action. Also, 'breathe' should be 'breathing' to be the present participle form, and the sentence needs 'or' to connect 'breathing' and 'bathing' properly.

× When I was the kid I have learned the piano so I have learned some simple chords about the the simple sums so I know the little about that.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned the piano so I learned some simple chords and simple songs, so I know a little about that.

The present perfect 'have learned' is incorrectly used with a past time reference 'when I was a kid'. Simple past 'learned' is appropriate. Also, 'the kid' should be 'a kid', and 'the simple sums' is likely a typo for 'simple songs'.

× But since the now I have no idea about the thing so I have no learn it in the assistant.

✓ But now I have no idea about it, so I have not learned it with assistance.

The phrase 'since the now' is incorrect; 'now' alone is sufficient. 'Have no learn' is incorrect; the present perfect negative form is 'have not learned'. 'In the assistant' is unclear and corrected to 'with assistance'.

× Actually I wanna sing to my favorite singer Jackson Wang, because his song always encourage me and give me brief.

✓ Actually, I want to sing to my favorite singer Jackson Wang, because his songs always encourage me and give me brief moments.

'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' to match 'always encourage'. 'Give me brief' is incomplete; 'brief moments' or 'brief inspiration' is needed.

× So I if I had a chance I really wanna sing with him.

✓ So if I had a chance, I would really want to sing with him.

The conditional sentence requires 'would' for the main verb. 'Wanna' should be 'want to' for formal correctness.

× I think singing is a typo, the way people around sit around and dance.

✓ I think singing is a type of activity where people sit around and dance.

'Typo' is incorrect; likely 'type' was intended. Also, 'people around sit around' is redundant; corrected to 'people sit around'.

× It will brings happiness and comfortables.

✓ It will bring happiness and comfort.

After modal 'will', the base form 'bring' is used, not 'brings'. 'Comfortables' is incorrect; 'comfort' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.