Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并提供具体原因。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: 回答过于简短且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达观点，并适当解释原因。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing is a natural talent.

提案: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重，建议直接回答问题并用简单句说明原因。

例: I want to sing for everyone because music can comfort and inspire people.

提案: 回答表达不清，建议用简洁明了的句子说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and feel joyful.

× Yes, I like because I think my saying is so good.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think my singing is very good.

动词后面需要用动名词形式作宾语，原句中'saying'用错，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。

× Everyone made me say I sing some very good.

✓ Everyone tells me I sing very well.

句子结构混乱，'made me say'用法不当，应改为'Everyone tells me'，'some very good'应改为副词'very well'修饰动词。

× I never study it.

✓ I have never studied it.

表示过去经历时，应该用现在完成时，'never study'时态错误，应改为'have never studied'。

× I think it is talent.

✓ I think it is a talent.

talent是名词，前面需要冠词'a'，这里不是动词-ing形式错误，但需要加冠词。

× Everyone I think my seeing can.

✓ I think I can sing for everyone.

句子结构不完整且词序错误，应调整为完整句子表达意思。

× Protect someone they need help and admire.

✓ To protect someone who needs help and admiration.

代词使用错误，缺少连接词，且动词形式不正确，应改为不定式短语并使用关系代词。

× my thing is so change can make people have power to study and work, do you know?

✓ My singing can change and give people the power to study and work, do you know?

'thing'用词不当，应改为'singing'，动词形式和句子结构需要调整，使表达更清晰。