Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免使用口头语，如“hmm”和“you know”，并注意主谓一致。

例: No, I don't like singing because I might annoy my neighbors, and I don't have any favorite singers.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁回答并用连词连接句子，避免重复。

例: No, I haven't taken singing classes because they are not common in China, but I can sing along with songs.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议用连词连接句子，避免重复，并清晰表达原因。

例: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel nervous and I don't think I sing very well, so I don't want to perform in front of others.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，表达混乱，有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用具体例子，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, songs like "Happy New Year" create a joyful atmosphere during celebrations.

× I'm maybe annoys the neighbors

✓ I may annoy the neighbors

这里主语是第一人称单数'I'，动词不应该用第三人称单数形式'annoys'，而应该用原形动词或情态动词加动词原形。句中'maybe'用法不当，改为'may'更合适。

× I don't have some favorite singers

✓ I don't have any favorite singers

否定句中使用'some'不合适，应该用'any'来表示否定的量词。

× in China there there may not have much classes to teach you how to how to sing

✓ in China there may not be many classes to teach you how to sing

'there be'结构中，'have'用法错误，应使用'be'动词。'much'用于不可数名词，'classes'是可数名词复数，应使用'many'。重复的'there'应去掉。

× I can sing, follow the songs

✓ I can sing along with the songs

动词'sing'后面需要介词短语来表达“跟着歌曲唱”，应使用'sing along with'。

× I think maybe I Can't Sing very well

✓ I think maybe I can't sing very well

情态动词'can't'中的'can'应小写，且'sing'不应大写。

× I don't want to show, show my thing to others

✓ I don't want to show my thing to others

重复使用'show'是不必要的，应去掉重复词。

× things can bring happiness to people and it it always can bring some depressions to people

✓ things can bring happiness to people and it always can bring some depression to people

'depression'在此处应为不可数名词，不能用复数形式'depressions'。

× Like the songs Happy New Year, The Sun can bring happiness to people in New Year's Day

✓ Like the songs 'Happy New Year', the sun can bring happiness to people on New Year's Day

专有名词歌曲名应加引号；'The Sun'不应大写；介词'in'用于具体日期应改为'on'。