Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如"funny"应为"fun"，"when I singing"应为"when I sing"。建议使用更地道的表达，并避免重复，如"It can relax"和"It can make me relax"意思重复。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Whenever I sing, I can forget my worries and feel more cheerful.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，语法和表达错误较多，"Practice sailing"与问题无关，且"system ways"表达不清。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因。

例: Actually, I have never had the chance to learn singing formally because I haven't found a good teacher or course yet.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，避免重复和断句错误。

例: I would like to sing for my mom and my friends because I want to share my feelings with them, although I'm not very good at singing yet. If I get proper training, I hope to improve.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，句子不连贯，提到的人名和歌曲不清楚。建议明确表达观点，并举具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I enjoy songs by Zhang Xueyou and Chen Meijing because their music always lifts my mood.

× Because when I singing, I feel very happy.

✓ Because when I am singing, I feel very happy.

动词进行时态需要使用助动词be加动词的现在分词形式。这里缺少了助动词am。

× It can relax.

✓ It can relax me.

句子缺少宾语，动词relax需要一个宾语来说明使谁放松。

× In fact, I don't have any chance to. Practice sailing. With system ways.

✓ In fact, I don't have any chance to practice singing in a systematic way.

句子断裂且单词错误，practice后应接动词原形，sailing应为singing，且表达方式不完整。

× Maybe I want to sing. To my mom. My friend.

✓ Maybe I want to sing to my mom and my friend.

不应将句子断开，to后应接宾语，且连接词and用于连接两个宾语。

× I'm not good at Sing, Sing, so it will make me embarrassment.

✓ I'm not good at singing, so it will make me embarrassed.

good at后应接动名词singing，embarrassment是名词，需用形容词embarrassed来描述人的感受。

× If you, if I get. Systematic way to practice.

✓ If I get a systematic way to practice,

句子不完整且断裂，缺少冠词a，且应连成完整条件句。

× Yes, I think they can. Bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think they can bring happiness to people.

句子不应断开，bring应与can连用构成情态动词+动词原形结构。

× I like, I like. Zhang Xue use. Songs. Just like Chen, me shijing.

✓ I like Zhang Xueyou's songs, just like Chen Meishijing.

句子断裂且人名拼写错误，应连贯表达喜欢某人的歌曲。