Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "when I some doing my homework". Рекомендуется использовать более правильные конструкции и избегать повторений, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am doing household chores like washing dishes or doing my homework. It makes these tasks more enjoyable.

提案: Ответ содержит много ошибок и непонятных фраз, например, "learned how to think" вместо "learned how to sing". Следует внимательно слушать вопрос и отвечать точно, используя правильные слова и грамматику.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think I have a good singing voice.

提案: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "and which they her birthday". Рекомендуется строить предложения проще и яснее, а также избегать лишних слов и повторений.

例: I want to sing for my friends on their birthdays. Singing 'Happy Birthday' makes the celebration more special.

提案: Ответ содержит много повторений и незавершенных мыслей. Следует строить предложения логично, использовать связующие слова и завершать мысли, чтобы ответ был понятным и связным.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it can improve people's moods and help them feel better when they are sad.

× Yes, I like singing and especially when I wash the dishes and when I some doing my homework or my house works.

✓ Yes, I like singing, especially when I wash the dishes and when I am doing my homework or my housework.

The phrase 'some doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'am doing' to indicate the present continuous tense. Also, 'house works' should be 'housework' as it is an uncountable noun. The verb form after 'when I' should be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to show ongoing action.

× No, I have never learned how to think because I don't have a voice.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't have a voice.

The word 'think' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'sing'. This is a lexical error rather than a grammar tense error, but correcting the verb is necessary for the sentence to make sense.

× I don't have a beautiful, beautiful or good choice.

✓ I don't have a beautiful or good voice.

The phrase 'beautiful, beautiful or good choice' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely about the quality of the voice, so 'voice' should replace 'choice'. Also, repeating 'beautiful' is redundant.

× That's why I have even learned how to think.

✓ That's why I have never learned how to sing.

The phrase 'have even learned' is incorrect; it should be 'have never learned' to express the negative meaning. Also, 'think' should be 'sing' as per context.

× Actually I want to sing for my friend and which they her birthday.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my friend on her birthday.

The phrase 'and which they her birthday' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition is 'on' for occasions like birthdays, and 'her' is the correct possessive pronoun referring to 'my friend'.

× I want to sing the happy birthday songs for my friends and this is a very lovely laughing, but I I.

✓ I want to sing the happy birthday song for my friend, and it is very lovely and fun.

'Happy birthday songs' should be singular 'song' as usually one song is sung. The phrase 'lovely laughing' is incorrect; 'lovely and fun' or 'lovely and joyful' would be appropriate. The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because every people have their mood and their and of course so that's why singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because every person has their mood, and of course, that's why singing can bring happiness to people.

'Every people' is incorrect; 'every' is used with singular nouns, so 'every person' is correct. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'every person'.

× When the people don't have a mood, they love the.

✓ When people are in a bad mood, they love singing.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Don't have a mood' is not a correct expression; 'are in a bad mood' is appropriate. The sentence needs to be completed to convey the intended meaning.