Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi, ancak bazı cümleler tekrarlayıcı ve biraz dağınık. Daha etkili ve akıcı olmak için cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapabilir, gereksiz tekrarları azaltabilirsiniz.

例: Honestly, I don't enjoy singing because I am not confident about my voice. However, I think my voice might be better suited for dubbing or voice acting in animations and movies.

提案: Cevabınız doğrudan ve anlaşılır, ancak bağlaç kullanımı ve cümle yapısı geliştirilebilir. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir anlatım için bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing. Even if I had a good voice, I believe becoming a good singer requires a lot of time and practice, which I can't afford as an engineer.

提案: Cevabınız açık ve net, ancak daha fazla detay ve bağlaç kullanarak cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Böylece konuşmanız daha akıcı ve etkileyici olur.

例: If I were to sing for someone, it would probably be my future wife. Although I am single now, I would love to sing and even play an instrument for her to express my feelings.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı ifadeler belirsiz ve anlamı zor anlaşılır. Daha açık ve spesifik ifadeler kullanarak, ayrıca bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlayarak daha etkili bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it boosts people's self-confidence and energy. Moreover, singing together helps people connect and enjoy the moment.

× Maybe it can be good for dubbing, animation, movies or similar things and it will enjoy me, but I don't like singing.

✓ Maybe it can be good for dubbing, animation, movies or similar things and it will enjoy me, but I don't like singing.

The phrase 'it will enjoy me' is incorrect because 'enjoy' is a transitive verb that requires a subject to enjoy something, not to be enjoyed. The intended meaning is likely 'I will enjoy it' or 'it will be enjoyable to me.' The sentence should be corrected to 'and I will enjoy it' or 'and it will be enjoyable to me.'

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

The question 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' uses the present perfect tense, so the answer should also be in present perfect tense to match. 'No, I didn't' is past simple and does not fit the question's tense. The correct response is 'No, I haven't.'

× I don't like singing based on my voice.

✓ I don't like singing because of my voice.

The phrase 'based on my voice' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to express reason is 'because of.' Therefore, 'I don't like singing because of my voice' is the correct form.

× I don't like my voice for singing.

✓ I don't like my voice for singing.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain an error based on the provided grammar problem types.

× If I'm going to sing for one person, probably it will be my wife in the future.

✓ If I'm going to sing to one person, probably it will be my wife in the future.

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person who is the recipient of the singing. Therefore, 'sing to one person' is correct, not 'sing for one person.'

× I'm single for now, but I would love to sing for my wife and as an extra I would like to play an instrument for her.

✓ I'm single for now, but I would love to sing to my wife and as an extra I would like to play an instrument for her.

As above, 'sing' is followed by 'to' when indicating the person who is the recipient of the singing. 'Sing for' can be used in some contexts but 'sing to' is more appropriate when referring to the person who listens.