Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“interested on saying”应为“interested in singing”，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的介词和时态，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I take a shower because it makes me feel like a diva. I also like singing karaoke with my friends as it helps me relax and have fun.

提案: 回答中“say whatever I want”用词不准确，应使用“sing whatever I want”。句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意时态和语法的正确性。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, although I often sing at karaoke. If I get the chance, I would definitely like to learn to sing properly.

提案: 回答中多次出现“say”错误，应为“sing”。句子结构简单且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题并补充具体原因，使用正确的动词和时态。

例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relieve stress and enjoy my time.

提案: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，“sadly song”应为“sad song”，句子未完整结束。建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Of course, I think singing is a great way to relieve stress and express emotions. For example, when people are happy, they sing joyful songs, and when they are sad, singing sad songs can help them release their feelings.

× I really am really interested on saying especially when I take a shower

✓ I really am really interested in singing especially when I take a shower

介词短语中，'interested'后应接介词'in'，而不是'on'。正确搭配是 'interested in'，表示对某事感兴趣。

× I feel like I was a diva and I always going to sing with my friends in karaoke

✓ I feel like I am a diva and I always go to sing with my friends in karaoke

'feel like'后面应接动词的-ing形式或完整句，这里应为 'I feel like I am a diva'。另外，'I always going'缺少助动词，应改为'I always go'。

× because I think it's really makes me relax and enjoy like I am.

✓ because I think it really makes me relax and enjoy myself.

'it's really makes'中多余的助动词 'is' 应去掉，正确为 'it really makes'。此外，'enjoy like I am'表达不清，应改为'enjoy myself'。

× I feel like I was a diva

✓ I feel like I am a diva

句子主语为现在时态，表达现在的感觉，故从句应使用现在时态 'am'，而非过去时 'was'。

× I really am really interested on saying

✓ I really am really interested in singing

'interested'后应接介词'in'，表示对某事感兴趣，'on'用法错误。

× I always going to sing with my friends in karaoke

✓ I always go to sing with my friends at karaoke

'go to sing'表达正确，但'going'缺少助动词。'in karaoke'应改为'at karaoke'，表示在卡拉OK场所。

× I just say whatever I want.

✓ I just sing whatever I want.

根据上下文，表达的是唱歌，动词应为'sing'，而非'say'。

× I haven't got a chance to learn how to sing, but if I have the opportunity I will definitely learn how to sing perfectly.

✓ I haven't got a chance to learn how to sing, but if I have the opportunity, I will definitely learn to sing perfectly.

'learn how to sing'可以简化为'learn to sing'，更地道。

× Well, actually I never think about this question.

✓ Well, actually I have never thought about this question.

表达过去到现在的经历，需用现在完成时'have never thought'，而非一般现在时。

× I think I just want to say for myself because singing is just a way for me to relieve stress and enjoy myself.

✓ I think I just want to sing for myself because singing is just a way for me to relieve stress and enjoy myself.

'say for myself'表达不当，应为'sing for myself'，符合语境。

× I think seeing is a very good way for people to relieve their stress, and it's also a very good way to show their emotion.

✓ I think singing is a very good way for people to relieve their stress, and it's also a very good way to show their emotions.

'seeing'应为'singing'，符合语境。'emotion'应为复数'emotions'，表示多种情感。

× if you are happy, you can sing a joyful sound to show your happiness.

✓ if you are happy, you can sing a joyful song to show your happiness.

'joyful sound'表达不自然，应为'joyful song'，表示快乐的歌曲。

× But if you feel sad, a sadly song can really help you to release your.

✓ But if you feel sad, a sad song can really help you to release your feelings.

'sadly'是副词，修饰动词，不能修饰名词'song'，应改为形容词'sad'。句末缺少宾语，补充'feelings'。