Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词有些错误，如“controls my tongues”应为“control my tongue”，且句子结构稍显复杂，影响流畅度。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式和单复数，避免冗余表达。

例: Yes, I like singing, but only when I am alone because I think my voice is not very good. Sometimes I find it hard to control my pitch and rhythm, so my singing doesn't sound nice. However, singing helps me relax and relieve stress.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“have never feel”应为“have never felt”，且“texting in lessons”用词不当，应为“taking lessons”。建议注意时态一致和词汇准确，避免表达错误。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have any talent for it. Also, I don't consider singing an important skill for my life or career, so I have never felt the need to take singing lessons.

提案: 回答中多处表达不清和拼写错误，如“think for anyone else”应为“sing for anyone else”，“my boy”应为“my voice”，“keep it provide”应为“keep it private”，“show comings”应为“shortcomings”。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性。

例: I don't really want to sing for anyone else, maybe just for myself. I think my voice is not very good sometimes, and since I am not a professional singer, I prefer to keep it private to avoid showing my shortcomings. Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy the moment.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，如“Seeing”应为“Singing”，且内容较为简单。建议增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people enjoy going to concerts to listen to professional singers, which helps them feel joyful and connect with others.

× I also find it difficult to controls my tongues and melodies so sometimes my singing sounds terrible.

✓ I also find it difficult to control my tongue and melodies, so sometimes my singing sounds terrible.

动词与主语不一致。动词control应与主语I保持一致，使用原形control。tongues应为tongue，melodies是复数，保持不变。

× Therefore I have never feel the need to texting in lessons.

✓ Therefore I have never felt the need to text in lessons.

时态错误。have never后应使用过去分词felt，texting应改为动词原形text。

× I don't really want to think for anyone else, just maybe just for myself.

✓ I don't really want to think about anyone else, maybe just for myself.

介词使用错误。think后应接about而非for。

× I think my boy isn't very good sometimes and since I am not a professional singer, I prefer to keep it provide to avoid showing my show comings.

✓ I think my voice isn't very good sometimes and since I am not a professional singer, I prefer to keep it private to avoid showing my shortcomings.

单词拼写错误。boy应为voice，provide应为private，show comings应为shortcomings。

× Singing along helps me relax and enjoy the moment without any.

✓ Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy the moment without any distractions.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语。along应为alone，补充缺失的名词distractions使句子完整。

× Seeing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress.

✓ Singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress.

单词拼写错误。Seeing应为Singing，符合上下文语境。