Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用错误，如将'singing'误写为'seeing'，影响表达的清晰度。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和冗余，回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I really like singing because it is a simple way to express my feelings. When I feel happy or sad, I often sing to share my emotions with others, which helps me connect with the world and understand myself better.

提案: 回答较简短，缺乏细节支持。建议在回答中加入更多具体信息，并注意语法，如动词时态和主谓一致，使表达更完整自然。

例: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I believe that true singing comes from the heart. However, I enjoy practicing on my own to improve my voice.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，最后一句话不清楚。建议加强句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my family, especially my mother, because she has been a great leader in my life. She always gives me useful advice that helps me grow, and when I feel sad, she cheers me up. Singing for her would be my way to show gratitude.

提案: 回答中多次出现'seeing'替代'singing'的错误，影响理解。句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑，避免重复。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a simple way to express feelings from the heart. Sharing emotions through singing can make people feel joyful and connected.

× When I feel happy or sad, I often use seeing to express my emotion to others so that I expect them because it can help me to feeling the world and feeling myself.

✓ When I feel happy or sad, I often use singing to express my emotions to others because I expect it can help me feel the world and myself.

这里'seeing'是错误的动名词形式，应该用'singing'，因为上下文讲的是唱歌。'feeling'用法错误，应该用动词原形'feel'。此外，'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，因为表达多种情感。

× Actually, I have never learned how to sing 'cause I think the real thing is the voice which come from your heart.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing because I think the real thing is the voice which comes from your heart.

'come'应使用第三人称单数形式'comes'，因为主语是单数'the voice'。此外，'cause'应改为完整形式'because'以更正式。

× She always gives me some useful suggestions which can help me grow better and better.

✓ She always gives me some useful suggestions which can help me grow better and better.

该句无语法错误，符合第三人称单数动词形式。

× When I feel sad, she always cheers me up and so that I want to use.

✓ When I feel sad, she always cheers me up, so I want to use singing to express myself.

原句结构不完整，'and so that I want to use'缺少宾语和完整表达，需补充完整句子使其通顺。

× Yes, I think thing can bring happiness to people because seeing is a very simple way which can help people to express their feelings over their heart.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a very simple way which can help people express their feelings from their hearts.

'thing'应为'singing'，且'seeing'错误，应为'singing'。'feelings over their heart'表达不当，应为'feelings from their hearts'。

× It was an impressive thing.

✓ It is an impressive thing.

根据上下文，表达的是一般事实，应该用现在时'is'而非过去时'was'。