Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repeated and incomplete phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to explain why you like singing.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. I also enjoy singing with my friends because it makes the experience more fun and enjoyable.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to use correct tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific details about your learning experience.

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school because it was part of our exam. I practiced regularly and improved my skills over time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. When they listen to me sing, I feel proud and happy.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to explain your opinion clearly using simple sentences and correct grammar.

例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps them express their feelings and enjoy the moment.

× Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better and remove my Mordoni when I go off.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better and removes my Mordoni when I go off.

The verb 'remove' should be in the third person singular form 'removes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to singing). This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb form in the present tense.

× And then I sing with my friends and it's it's a very and it's a very.

✓ And then I sing with my friends, and it's very enjoyable.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('it's it's a very and it's a very'). It lacks a proper predicate and object. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Yes, I learned how to how to sing because it's a part of our school exam when I was young.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing because it was a part of our school exam when I was young.

The phrase 'it's a part' should be in the past tense 'it was a part' to match the past time frame 'when I was young'. This is a tense consistency issue.

× Then I practice my singing in school and day by day I become a pro singer.

✓ Then I practiced my singing in school, and day by day I became a pro singer.

The verbs 'practice' and 'become' should be in the past tense 'practiced' and 'became' to maintain consistency with the past time frame indicated by 'Then' and 'when I was young' earlier.

× Actually, when I think then everybody saw my thing and I feel very proud for that.

✓ Actually, when I think about it, everybody saw my performance, and I feel very proud of that.

The pronoun 'my thing' is vague and unclear; 'my performance' is more appropriate. Also, 'proud for that' should be 'proud of that' as the correct preposition with 'proud' is 'of'.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people 'cause when a boy or a girl or man sing a song then he remove his his happiness for his Singh.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when a boy, a girl, or a man sings a song, he removes his sadness through his singing.

The verb 'sing' should be 'sings' to agree with the singular subject. 'Remove his his happiness' is incorrect; likely intended to say 'removes his sadness'. Also, 'for his Singh' is unclear; corrected to 'through his singing'. This addresses subject-verb agreement and clarity in pronoun and noun usage.