Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、もう少し具体的な理由や経験を加えるとより良くなります。例えば、どのような時に歌うのが好きかや、歌うことでどんな気持ちになるかを詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel relaxed and satisfied. For example, after a long day at work, singing my favorite songs helps me relieve stress and improves my mood.

提案: 文法の誤りと表現の不自然さがあります。"a great people"は誤りで、"a great singer"が適切です。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

例: No, I've never taken singing lessons, but I often practice singing because I want to become a great singer one day.

提案: 質問の意図は「誰のために歌いたいか」ですが、回答は「誰に歌ってほしいか」になっています。質問に直接答え、理由や具体的な状況を加えると良いでしょう。

例: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. For example, I enjoy performing at family gatherings to make them happy.

提案: 文法ミスがあり、表現が不自然です。"a song have"は"a song has"に直し、理由をもっと具体的に述べると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開してください。

例: Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness because songs have the power to express emotions and connect people. For instance, singing together can create a joyful atmosphere and improve people's mood.

× I often try to sing well because I want to be a great people who can sing.

✓ I often try to sing well because I want to be a great person who can sing.

The word 'people' is plural, but here it refers to a single individual, so the singular form 'person' should be used.

× I want her to sing for me and especially I want her to sing The Cooler Summer.

✓ I want her to sing for me and especially, I want her to sing 'The Cooler Summer'.

A comma is needed after 'especially' to separate the clauses properly. Also, the song title should be enclosed in quotation marks to indicate it is a title.

× I think singing can bring happiness because a song have a lot great power to change people so it also bring happiness.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness because a song has a lot of great power to change people, so it also brings happiness.

The singular noun 'a song' requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'a lot great power' is missing the preposition 'of' and 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.