Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当（如"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. It makes me feel happy and full of energy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（如"don't do spend"），表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally because I treat it as a hobby. I prefer singing freely by myself.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但部分表达不够地道，如"feel peace and enjoyable"。建议使用更自然的短语表达感受，并注意句子连贯性。

例: I usually sing for myself because I enjoy the moment. Singing makes me feel peaceful and happy, as if nothing can bother me.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），语法错误（"bring"应为"brings"），表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，表达时更具体明确。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is free and helps them relax and enjoy themselves.

× Yes I do because when I am seeing I feel like I am a fresh person who just needs to release his emotions.

✓ Yes I do because when I am singing I feel like I am a fresh person who just needs to release his emotions.

这里的“seeing”是动词的现在分词形式，但语境中应使用“singing”，因为谈论的是唱歌。动词形式错误导致句意不清。

× Actually not, because I just put it as my interest so I don't do spend much time on learning it.

✓ Actually not, because I just put it as my interest so I don't spend much time on learning it.

“don't do spend”中“do”多余，应去掉。助动词“do”用于强调或疑问句，这里是陈述句，直接用“don't spend”。

× I think probably myself, I like to sing along and sing for myself.

✓ I think probably for myself, I like to sing along and sing for myself.

“I think probably myself”缺少介词“for”，正确表达应为“think probably for myself”，表示“我想可能是为了我自己”。

× When I'm singing, I really enjoy the moment, which makes me feel peace and enjoyable, like nothing can beat me.

✓ When I'm singing, I really enjoy the moment, which makes me feel peaceful and joyful, like nothing can beat me.

“peace”是名词，需用形容词“peaceful”修饰感受；“enjoyable”通常形容事物，形容人的感受应用“joyful”。

× Yes, of course I think seeing is free which are not like something expensive but it actually bring happiness.

✓ Yes, of course I think singing is free which is not like something expensive but it actually brings happiness.

“seeing”应为“singing”；“which are”主语是单数“singing”，应用“which is”；“bring”应为第三人称单数形式“brings”。