Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. Someone once told me that I sing badly, so I lack confidence.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍微扩展，增加自然度和流畅度。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing.

提案: 回答表达了情感，但句子较长且有些重复。建议分句表达，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they have always done their best to raise me. I am very grateful for their love and support.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免口语化的填充词。

例: I think it depends. Singing doesn't make me happy because I'm not good at it. However, for people who can sing well and use singing to express their feelings, it can bring happiness.

× I was once told that I just sing so bad so I don't have the confidence on seeing.

✓ I was once told that I just sing so badly so I don't have the confidence in singing.

这里的错误是动词的过去时态和副词的使用。'sing so bad'中，'bad'应改为副词'badly'来修饰动词'sing'。另外，'confidence on seeing'应为'confidence in singing'，介词使用错误。建议将'bad'改为'badly'，'on'改为'in'。

× I was once told that I just sing so bad so I don't have the confidence on seeing.

✓ I was once told that I just sing so badly so I don't have the confidence in singing.

介词'on'用在'confidence'后面不正确，正确搭配是'confidence in'。因此应将'on'改为'in'。

× I don't have the confidence on seeing.

✓ I don't have the confidence in singing.

'confidence'后面应接介词'in'，表示对某事有信心。这里应改为'in singing'。

× sing is their way to, you know, conveying their feelings

✓ singing is their way to, you know, convey their feelings

'way to'后应接动词原形，不能用动名词'conveying'，应改为'very'。这里应将'conveying'改为'convey'。

× I think badly.

✓ I think badly about it.

'think badly'表达不清，通常需要加上宾语或改为更合适的表达，如'think badly about it'，表示对某事有负面看法。