Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和结构，如使用动名词形式，并且避免重复。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax during my free time.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误明显，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用正确的词汇和句式。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing by myself and enjoy it.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达不完整。建议明确表达想为谁唱歌，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: I want to sing for promoting world peace and to bring happiness to people through joyful songs.

提案: 回答中断断续续，语法和表达错误较多。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并提供具体原因。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because many songs make people feel relaxed and joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because singing can let me relaxing in our free time.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing can let me relax in our free time.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）错误，动词let后应接动词原形，不能用动名词。

× No, I always sing by myself and I think my sing singing level is great and I don't have singer.

✓ No, I always sing by myself and I think my singing level is great and I don't have a singer.

时态使用不当，句中sing singing level应为现在分词形式表示持续状态，且缺少冠词a。

× No, I always sing by myself and I think my sing singing level is great and I don't have singer.

✓ No, I always sing by myself and I think my singing level is great and I don't have a singer.

缺少冠词a，且singer前应加冠词，表示特指某个歌手。

× I want to sing for the peace of the world and sing some happy song to bring people. Great emojis.

✓ I want to sing for the peace of the world and sing some happy songs to bring joy to people.

介词使用错误，bring后应接宾语和宾语补足语，且song应为复数形式。

× I want to sing for the peace of the world and sing some happy song to bring people. Great emojis.

✓ I want to sing for the peace of the world and sing some happy songs to bring joy to people.

名词复数形式错误，happy song应为happy songs。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Many songs can. People feel happy and relaxing and. Massey.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Many songs can make people feel happy and relaxed.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语，relaxing应改为形容词relaxed，表达状态。