Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法。

例: Yes, I like singing because music makes me feel happy, and I enjoy singing English songs.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子说明原因。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am very busy and find it difficult to practice.

提案: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯性和细节。建议使用连接词并具体说明原因。

例: I want to sing for my parents, family, and friends because I want to share my happiness with them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明原因。

例: Yes, of course. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy life.

× I I like singing because I like music and I sing English songs is make me happy.

✓ I like singing because I like music and singing English songs makes me happy.

句子结构不正确，'I sing English songs is make me happy'部分语法混乱，应改为'singing English songs makes me happy'，使句子通顺且主谓一致。

× No, I'm so busy and seeing is. Uh, problem for me.

✓ No, I'm so busy and singing is a problem for me.

动词形式错误，'seeing'应为'singing'，且缺少冠词'a'，使句子完整且表达清晰。

× I want to sing for my parents and my family and my friend.

✓ I want to sing for my parents, my family, and my friends.

名词单复数错误，'friend'应为复数形式'friends'，因为前面提到了多个对象。

× Yes, of course, because seeing is so happy to people. People enjoy seeing in life.

✓ Yes, of course, because singing makes people happy. People enjoy singing in life.

动词形式错误，'seeing'应为'singing'，且表达应为'singing makes people happy'，更符合英语习惯。