Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say "Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and I enjoy it. I also often listen to songs, which helps me relax."

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and I enjoy it. I also often listen to songs, which helps me relax.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks clarity. Use clear sentences and avoid repetition. For example, say "I haven't learned how to sing because I wasn't very interested, but I would like to learn in the future. I especially enjoy Bengali songs."

例: I haven't learned how to sing because I wasn't very interested, but I would like to learn in the future. I especially enjoy Bengali songs.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete phrases. Try to be specific and use correct pronouns. For example, say "I want to sing for my favorite person because they always enjoy listening to me."

例: I want to sing for my favorite person because they always enjoy listening to me.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words. For example, say "Absolutely, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel relaxed. Singing can also create a joyful atmosphere."

例: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel relaxed. Singing can also create a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I like singing because singing is a passion that's help you for explain your emotion to other people and you can also enjoy while singing and I often listen singing that's help me for.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing is a passion that helps you to explain your emotions to other people, and you can also enjoy yourself while singing. I often listen to singing that helps me.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'passion'. Also, 'help you for explain' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps you to explain'. 'Listen singing' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to singing'. 'Enjoy while singing' is incomplete; it should be 'enjoy yourself while singing'. These corrections improve verb forms and preposition usage.

× Actually I don't have the interest on singing that's why I don't learn about it.

✓ Actually, I don't have an interest in singing; that's why I haven't learned about it.

The phrase 'don't have the interest on' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have an interest in'. Also, 'don't learn about it' is incorrect in this context; the present perfect 'haven't learned' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× But I have many types of thing especially the Bengali singing is favorite for me.

✓ But I have many types of things, especially Bengali singing, which is my favorite.

'Types of thing' should be pluralized to 'types of things'. Also, 'the Bengali singing is favorite for me' is awkward; it should be 'Bengali singing, which is my favorite' to correctly express preference.

× I want to sing for my favorite person and ** *** always want to hear my singing that's why I want to sing for him her.

✓ I want to sing for my favorite person, and he or she always wants to hear my singing; that's why I want to sing for him or her.

The pronouns 'him her' are incorrect and unclear; they should be separated as 'him or her'. Also, the subject pronoun is missing before 'always want'; it should be 'he or she always wants' to agree with the singular subject.

× Absolutely because singing bring happiness to people because it helps you for express your emotion and that types of reality.

✓ Absolutely, because singing brings happiness to people as it helps you express your emotions and those types of realities.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Helps you for express' is incorrect; it should be 'helps you express'. 'That types of reality' is incorrect; it should be 'those types of realities' to match plural form.