Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it also good way”应为“it is also a good way”，以及“have a better communicate”应为“have better communication”。建议加强语法基础，注意冠词和动词形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. Moreover, it is a good way to improve communication with my friends.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“never been learned for seeing professionally”应为“never learned to sing professionally”，且“mini the singer”表达不明确。建议加强动词时态和词汇的准确使用，避免拼写错误，提升表达的清晰度。

例: Well, I have never learned to sing professionally, but I often imitate singers when I sing songs from movies or with my friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“thank for her to raise me up”应为“thank her for raising me up”，且“her her care about me”重复且不自然。建议注意介词的正确使用，避免重复，表达更简洁流畅。

例: I want to sing for my mom to thank her for raising me and caring for me.

提案: 回答中多处拼写错误，如“thing”应为“singing”，“seeing”应为“singing”，且“unhappy”应为“unhappiness”或“sadness”。建议加强拼写和词汇的准确性，同时表达应更连贯自然。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. However, it can also evoke other emotions like sadness because different songs have different meanings.

× it also good way to have a better communicate with my friends so I like singings.

✓ it is also a good way to have better communication with my friends, so I like singing.

句中缺少系动词“is”，导致句子不完整；“communicate”应使用名词形式“communication”；“singings”应为不可数名词“singing”。建议补充系动词，使用正确的名词形式，且不可数名词不加复数。

× I like singings.

✓ I like singing.

“singing”作为动名词不可数，不能加复数形式“singings”，应使用单数形式。

× I have never been learned for seeing professionally

✓ I have never learned to sing professionally

“have never been learned”结构错误，正确用法是现在完成时“have never learned”；“for seeing”应为“to sing”，动词不定式表示目的。

× I always mini the singer to sing the song for film or with friends.

✓ I always mimic the singer to sing songs for films or with friends.

“mini”应为“mimic”，意为模仿；“the song”应为复数“songs”，表示泛指；“film”应为复数“films”。

× I wanna sing for my mom and also I want to thank for her to raise me up and her her care about me and so on she did for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mom and also want to thank her for raising me and caring about me and so on, all that she has done for me.

“thank for her”应为“thank her for”；“raise me up”应为动名词“raising me”；“her care about me”应为“caring about me”；句子结构混乱，需调整顺序使表达清晰。

× Yeah, I think thing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“thing”应为“singing”，语义错误，需用正确名词表达。

× However, seeing also can bring other emotions to people, like sadness, unhappy, because different songs bring different meanings.

✓ However, singing can also bring other emotions to people, like sadness and unhappiness, because different songs have different meanings.

“seeing”应为“singing”；“unhappy”应为名词形式“unhappiness”；“bring different meanings”改为“have different meanings”更合适。