Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单复数形式和时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。

例: I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and improves my mood. For example, when I sing, I feel happier and more relaxed.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的过去时态，并且明确说明学习唱歌的经历，避免模糊的表达。

例: I learned how to sing when I was a child because I joined a singing club at school.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子更简洁自然。

例: I want to sing for my parents to show my appreciation because they have done a lot for me and helped me improve my singing and confidence.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误和语法问题，句子结构较简单。建议注意拼写，使用正确的动词形式，并尝试使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I think singing can bring happiness to people. When people sing, it helps them release stress and improve their mood, which makes them feel relaxed.

× I like singing because of several point.

✓ I like singing because of several points.

这里的“point”应该用复数形式“points”，因为前面用了“several”，表示多个，名词需要用复数。

× It make me happy when I'm singing.

✓ It makes me happy when I'm singing.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词“make”应加-s，变成“makes”。

× I have learned how to sing when I am a child because I am one of the singing organizations.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a child because I was one of the singing organizations.

描述过去的动作，应该用一般过去时“learned”和“was”，而不是现在完成时和现在时。

× I have learned how to sing when I am a child because I am one of the singing organizations.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a child because I was one of the singing organizations.

“organizations”指的是组织，复数形式是正确的，但这里的“one of the singing organizations”表达不自然，建议改为“one of the members of a singing organization”更合适。

× I want to sing for my parents to appreciate them because they do much more thing for me and they helped me improve my voice and confidence.

✓ I want to sing for my parents to appreciate them because they do many more things for me and they helped me improve my voice and confidence.

“thing”应使用复数形式“things”，因为“many more”表示数量多，名词需用复数。

× I want to sing for my parents to appreciate them because they do much more thing for me and they helped me improve my voice and confidence.

✓ I want to sing for my parents to appreciate them because they do many more things for me and they have helped me improve my voice and confidence.

前半句用一般现在时“do”，后半句描述过去到现在的动作，建议用现在完成时“have helped”。

× I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people.

这里“seeing”应为“singing”，是拼写错误，且“singing”作为动名词用法正确。

× When people singing, it helps them release stress and improve their mood.

✓ When people are singing, it helps them release stress and improve their mood.

“When people singing”缺少助动词，应为“are singing”，表示现在进行时。