Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并注意动词形式的正确使用。

例: Yes, I like singing because I have loved music for many years. I want to learn how to sing better to understand music more deeply.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议使用简单句子，清楚说明学习唱歌的经历和感受。

例: Yes, when I was a child, my parents taught me how to sing and sent me to a singing class. However, I did not enjoy it and stopped going.

提案: 回答表达了想为父母唱歌的想法，但句子中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并避免重复。

例: I want to sing for my parents because I feel nervous singing in front of others. So, I usually sing at home for them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的句子结构，具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I watch a musical, the singers express their emotions, which makes me feel joyful.

× I fell in love with musicians for years

✓ I have fallen in love with musicians for years

这里表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应该用现在完成时，故将过去式fell改为现在完成时have fallen。

× if I want to understand the musical best

✓ if I want to understand the music best

musical通常指音乐剧，这里应使用music表示音乐，且不需要冠词the。

× I will learn to how to singing and how to sing it better

✓ I will learn how to sing and how to sing it better

learn后接动词不定式，不能有to和动名词ing形式混用，且to和how的位置错误。

× my mother and my dad has told me how to sing

✓ my mother and my dad have told me how to sing

主语是复数（my mother and my dad），谓语动词应使用复数have而非单数has。

× and and make me into a singing class

✓ and made me join a singing class

重复使用and错误，且表达不自然，应该用过去式made和动词join搭配。

× but I'm not not love it and then abandoned it

✓ but I did not love it and then abandoned it

love是动词，否定时应用助动词did not，且重复not错误。

× I am really exhausted when I think to the public

✓ I am really exhausted when I think about the public

think后面搭配介词about表示“考虑”，而不是to。

× the singers have bring their emotions to me

✓ the singers have brought their emotions to me

have后应接过去分词brought，而非原形bring。