Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, say "I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress when I study a lot." Also, avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer concise.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress after studying for long hours.

提案: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like "that police singing." You can say, "No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I often sing while doing homework." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I often sing while doing my homework to make it more enjoyable.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity. Instead of "I'm like to sing with myself," say "I prefer to sing alone because I think my voice is not very good." Also, avoid filler words like "umm."

例: Honestly, I prefer to sing alone because I think my voice is not very good.

提案: Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace "seeing" with "singing," and say "singing can help people relax or reduce stress on bad days, so it brings happiness." Make your answer more natural and clear.

例: Of course, singing can help people relax and reduce stress on bad days, which brings them happiness.

× Definitely, I'm very like to sing because it help me to video stress when I learning so much.

✓ Definitely, I really like singing because it helps me to relieve stress when I am learning a lot.

The phrase 'I'm very like to sing' is incorrect; 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' to express enjoyment of an activity. 'Help me to video stress' is incorrect; likely intended 'help me to relieve stress'. Also, 'help' should be in third person singular 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'When I learning so much' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense, so it should be 'when I am learning a lot'. These corrections improve verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× Absolutely not. I never learn how to sing and that police singing.

✓ Absolutely not. I have never learned how to sing and that is not my policy for singing.

The verb 'learn' in past tense should be 'learned' or 'learnt' to indicate completed action. The phrase 'that police singing' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; assuming it means 'that is not my policy for singing' or similar. Using present perfect 'have never learned' is appropriate to express experience up to now.

× When I do something uh, such as when I do some homework, I sing together.

✓ When I do something, such as homework, I sing along.

The phrase 'I sing together' is incorrect; 'sing together' requires another person. If the student means to sing while doing homework, 'sing along' or 'sing to myself' is better. Also, 'do some homework' can be simplified to 'do homework'. The correction improves verb usage and clarity.

× Honestly, I don't want to sing with everyone because umm, my voice is pretty bad so I'm like to sing with myself.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to sing with everyone because my voice is pretty bad, so I like to sing by myself.

The phrase 'I'm like to sing with myself' is incorrect. 'I'm like' should be 'I like', and 'with myself' is better expressed as 'by myself' to indicate singing alone. This corrects pronoun and verb usage.

× Of course seeing is can help people react or reduce their stress when they have some bad day, so it's bring people happiness.

✓ Of course, singing can help people relax or reduce their stress when they have a bad day, so it brings people happiness.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' (likely a typo). 'Is can help' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' does not need 'is'. 'React' is likely a mistake for 'relax'. 'Some bad day' should be 'a bad day' (singular article). 'It's bring' should be 'it brings' to agree with singular subject. These corrections fix verb forms, article usage, and word choice.