Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Actually, I love singing very much because I feel relaxed when I sing in UH. I can sing everywhere when I sorrow, when I do exercise, so I really love singing.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
To be honest, I never learn how to sing before. I hope, I do hope that someday I can learn singing skills and I really, I really love it, learn to sing.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I want to I want to sing for my parents, my siblings, my asking my, my my husband and I really like I really love him to sing with my my rabbit.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I do. I I think that singing can bring happiness to people because singing when you're singing, you can express your strength that I think and you can relax and feel happy. Maybe that that's my view.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic giữa các câu.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood. For example, I often sing when I feel sad or during exercise, which makes me feel better.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung chi tiết, sử dụng từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
例: No, I have never taken singing lessons before. However, I hope to learn singing skills someday because I really love singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại và sắp xếp ý tưởng một cách logic, sử dụng từ nối để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.
例: I would like to sing for my family, including my parents, siblings, and my husband. Singing for them would make me very happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và câu giải thích, sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and helps them relax, which improves their mood.
文法
× I never learn how to sing before.
✓ I have never learned how to sing before.
The sentence refers to an experience up to now, so the present perfect tense 'have never learned' is appropriate. Also, 'learn' should be in past participle form 'learned' after 'have'.
× I can sing everywhere when I sorrow, when I do exercise, so I really love singing.
✓ I can sing everywhere when I am sad, when I exercise, so I really love singing.
The word 'sorrow' is a noun and not used correctly here; 'am sad' is the correct expression. Also, 'do exercise' is better expressed as 'exercise' without 'do'.
× I want to I want to sing for my parents, my siblings, my asking my, my my husband and I really like I really love him to sing with my my rabbit.
✓ I want to sing for my parents, my siblings, my husband, and I really love him. I also want to sing with my rabbit.
The original sentence is confusing with repeated words and unclear pronoun use. Clarifying the subjects and objects and removing repetitions improves clarity.
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