Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在用词不当，如"impress my emotions"应为"express my emotions"，且句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达并注意词汇准确性。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, after a stressful day, singing my favorite song lifts my mood and makes me feel happier. Also, my friends often praise my voice, which encourages me to practice more.

提案: 回答中出现了拼写错误（"Troll"应为"choir"，"Seeing"应为"Singing"），且句子表达不够流畅，建议注意拼写和语法，保持句子简洁自然。

例: To be honest, I have never learned to sing professionally because it has always been a hobby. However, I joined my school choir, which helped me improve my vocal skills and gain confidence. Singing has always been my passion, and I try to practice whenever I can.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（"busroom"应为"bathroom"），且部分表达不够自然，建议注意词汇准确性并简化句子，使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to sing for myself because I enjoy spending time alone, and it helps me relax and relieve stress. I especially like singing in the bathroom because the echo makes my voice sound better. This private time lets me express my emotions freely without worrying about others.

提案: 回答中出现拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且表达不够准确，建议注意拼写和句子结构，避免重复和不自然的表达。

例: Yes, definitely. I believe that singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, whether alone or with others.

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because it's helped me relax and impress my emotions.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

这里的时态应该保持一致，使用一般现在时表示习惯性动作；'impress my emotions' 应为 'express my emotions'，表达“表达情感”的意思。

× To be honest, I have never learned to sing professionally because it had always been just a hobby for me.

✓ To be honest, I have never learned to sing professionally because it has always been just a hobby for me.

这里使用现在完成时态 'has always been' 更符合语境，表示从过去到现在一直是这样。

× However, I joined my school Troll, which was a great opportunity to develop my vocal skills and gain more confidence.

✓ However, I joined my school choir, which was a great opportunity to develop my vocal skills and gain more confidence.

'Troll' 可能是拼写错误，应为 'choir'（合唱团），更符合语境。

× Seeing has always been the passion of mine and I try to improve my skills whenever I got the chance.

✓ Singing has always been my passion and I try to improve my skills whenever I get the chance.

'Seeing' 应为 'Singing'，且表达应为 'my passion'；'got' 应为一般现在时 'get'，保持时态一致。

× I prefer to sing for myself because I really enjoy spending time alone and saying it helps me relax and relieve stress.

✓ I prefer to sing for myself because I really enjoy spending time alone and I think it helps me relax and relieve stress.

'saying it helps me' 结构不正确，应改为 'I think it helps me'，使句子通顺。

× I especially like staying in the busroom because the echo makes my voice sound better, which makes me feel happier and more confident.

✓ I especially like staying in the bathroom because the echo makes my voice sound better, which makes me feel happier and more confident.

'busroom' 是拼写错误，应为 'bathroom'，符合语境。

× Yes, definitely. I strongly believe that seeing can bring lots of happiness to people because it allows individuals to express their emotions freely and can serve as an effective way to relieve stress.

✓ Yes, definitely. I strongly believe that singing can bring lots of happiness to people because it allows individuals to express their emotions freely and can serve as an effective way to relieve stress.

'Seeing' 应为 'Singing'，表达“唱歌”带来快乐的意思。

× For instance, many people feel joyful and more relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, whether they are doing it alone, to privacy, or joining others.

✓ For instance, many people feel joyful and more relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, whether they are doing it alone, in private, or joining others.

'to privacy' 用法错误，应为 'in private'，表示“私下地”。