Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的句式表达自己的观点，并避免重复和犹豫词汇。可以简洁明了地说明自己不喜欢唱歌的原因。

例: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and I don't think I sing well.

提案: 回答较为直接，但可以使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复“study”一词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I am always busy with my studies, so I don't have time for singing lessons.

提案: 回答内容具体且表达了感情，但句子结构较为重复。建议使用连接词和同义词丰富表达，使语言更自然。

例: I would like to sing for my mother because I love her deeply and want to express my gratitude through a special song.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的单复数形式和更准确的词汇，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, singing brings happiness to people, and listening to songs can also make people feel joyful.

× No, I don't have seeing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, soundful.

✓ No, I don't like singing because singing is really difficult for me and, uh, it is not, uh, pleasant.

动词后面不应该用动名词形式'seeing'，这里应该用动词'like'来表达喜欢与否。'soundful'不是正确的形容词，应该用'pleasant'来表达愉快的感觉。

× No, because I am always studying so I don't have time to study how to sing.

✓ No, because I am always studying, so I don't have time to learn how to sing.

这里的'study how to sing'表达不准确，应该用'learn how to sing'表示学习唱歌的技能。

× Yes, singing is a happy things for people and listen to a song is also happy things.

✓ Yes, singing is a happy thing for people and listening to a song is also a happy thing.

'things'是复数形式，但前面有不定冠词'a'，应使用单数形式'thing'。此外，'listen to a song'应改为动名词形式'listening to a song'，作为主语使用。