Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。話の流れを整理し、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。例えば、理由をはっきり述べ、具体的な感情や状況を説明すると良いです。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. Especially when I feel successful, singing loudly makes me feel even happier.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、話が途中で終わっているため、意味が不明瞭です。正しい時制と文の構造を意識し、話を完結させる練習をしましょう。具体的な理由や希望を明確に述べることが大切です。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. However, I am interested in taking singing lessons because I want to improve my ability to sing high notes.

提案: 回答が少し曖昧で、文の繋がりが不自然です。質問に直接答えた後、具体的な例を挙げて説明すると良いでしょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習も必要です。

例: I usually sing for my family and friends on their birthdays. Also, I enjoy going to karaoke alone because I can sing freely without worrying about an audience.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。話の構成を整理し、具体的な理由や感想を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげることも重要です。

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. At many parties, people sing together, and I can see their bright and happy faces. Singing helps us relax and enjoy the moment.

× I really like singing because I feel very relaxing and uh, when, if, especially when I feel very successful, I can, when I sing, I can have the louder voice and I can yell and in the video I it be very.

✓ I really like singing because I feel very relaxed and, especially when I feel very successful, I can sing louder and yell, and in the video, I am very expressive.

The phrase 'I feel very relaxing' is incorrect because 'relaxing' is an adjective describing something that causes relaxation, not a feeling. The correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'relaxed'. Also, 'I can have the louder voice' is awkward; it should be 'I can sing louder'. The phrase 'in the video I it be very' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'in the video, I am very expressive' to make sense.

× No, I haven't. I have not. But I'm really interest it in learning how to sing because I'm actually not good at singing.

✓ No, I haven't. I have not. But I'm really interested in learning how to sing because I'm actually not good at singing.

The phrase 'I'm really interest it in learning' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I'm really interested in learning' because 'interested' is the past participle adjective used with 'be' verb to express interest, and the preposition 'in' follows 'interested'. 'Interest' is a noun or verb, not an adjective here.

× I can sing, of course, but I want to sing in the really high pitch, but I'm not good at. So I when I joined the class, I want to.

✓ I can sing, of course, but I want to sing in a really high pitch, and I'm not good at it. So when I join a class, I want to improve.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'I'm not good at' lacks an object; it should be 'I'm not good at it'. 'So I when I joined the class, I want to' is incomplete and mixes tenses. It is corrected to 'So when I join a class, I want to improve' to express future intention properly.

× Sometimes I think the birthday song to, uh, my family or my friends, my, my partner and I really love to go to karaoke by myself.

✓ Sometimes I sing the birthday song to my family, my friends, or my partner, and I really love to go to karaoke by myself.

The phrase 'I think the birthday song to' is incorrect; the verb 'think' does not fit here. The correct verb is 'sing'. Also, the list of people should be separated by commas and conjunctions properly.

× At that time, there's no audience.

✓ At that time, there is no audience.

The sentence is in present tense to describe a general situation, so 'there's' (there is) is acceptable. However, if referring to a past event, it should be 'there was no audience'. The original sentence is acceptable if present tense is intended.

× I think by myself, I enjoy by myself.

✓ I think by myself, I enjoy being by myself.

The phrase 'I enjoy by myself' is incomplete; 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund or noun. Correct form is 'I enjoy being by myself'.

× Yes I do. I sell so many parties. Where so many people or participants sing together At that time I thought so many faces was very brilliant and it looks very happy.

✓ Yes, I do. I have been to so many parties where many people or participants sing together. At that time, I thought many faces were very bright and looked very happy.

'I sell so many parties' is incorrect; likely intended 'I have been to so many parties'. 'So many people or participants' is redundant; 'many people' suffices. 'So many faces was' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'faces were' is correct. 'It looks very happy' should be 'they looked very happy' to agree with 'faces'.

× So I thinking makes us really relaxing and makes.

✓ So I think singing makes us really relaxed and happy.

'I thinking' is incorrect; should be 'I think'. 'Makes us really relaxing' is incorrect; 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation, but here the feeling is on 'us', so 'makes us really relaxed' is correct. The sentence is incomplete; added 'and happy' to complete the thought.